Fallen
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Fallen
A Story with No Title - A story that is unambed written by Noah Python*
Maturity - ROmance, probably kissing, boyfriend girlfriend, the works. Death, violence, fighting, kidnappings..
Fantasy - Demons and Angels, possibly other creatures
Prologue
Pitter patter. Pitter patter. Pitter patter. Rain splattered against the ground outside the one odd house on Piviot Drive, Delaware. Even in the stormy weather where the clouds were as dark as the asphalt outside the house, it still stuck out like a beacon in the darkening world around it. The walls were not the normal white that most houses were, but a bright neon yellow with the darkest black shudders and door you could have ever seen. Outside were many rosebushes, and the grass seemed as green as green could get, the wet tear drops from the sky making it glisten ever so slightly as it started to cease, sunlight reaching through the clouds like snakes of gold swimming through the murky waters of a lake. This was the house of Jacoby and Delaney Summers, 14 year old twins that, if they knew how much their life would change that day, would have been more conscious to lock the door, and to get out of that house. As soon as possible.
* - Writting Name
Maturity - ROmance, probably kissing, boyfriend girlfriend, the works. Death, violence, fighting, kidnappings..
Fantasy - Demons and Angels, possibly other creatures
Prologue
Pitter patter. Pitter patter. Pitter patter. Rain splattered against the ground outside the one odd house on Piviot Drive, Delaware. Even in the stormy weather where the clouds were as dark as the asphalt outside the house, it still stuck out like a beacon in the darkening world around it. The walls were not the normal white that most houses were, but a bright neon yellow with the darkest black shudders and door you could have ever seen. Outside were many rosebushes, and the grass seemed as green as green could get, the wet tear drops from the sky making it glisten ever so slightly as it started to cease, sunlight reaching through the clouds like snakes of gold swimming through the murky waters of a lake. This was the house of Jacoby and Delaney Summers, 14 year old twins that, if they knew how much their life would change that day, would have been more conscious to lock the door, and to get out of that house. As soon as possible.
* - Writting Name
Last edited by Snakeboy on 9/1/2009, 4:22 pm; edited 3 times in total
Noah the Flood- Best-Selling Author
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Re: Fallen
Yeah!! Great job buddeh! So far so great
Taylor_Potter- Best-Selling Author
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Thanks guys! My Language teacher filled my head with stuff about similies, ironey, flashbacks, ottomattapeia (I SPELT THAT WRONG) and stuff, so..yeah you'll be seeing alot of writting from me xD
Noah the Flood- Best-Selling Author
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Yeah!! Wait... what's o-word?
Taylor_Potter- Best-Selling Author
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Nice. x3
I think it's onomatopeia? Wait, no, that's the wrong spelling too . . . *checks* Aha! Onomatopoeia!
I think it's onomatopeia? Wait, no, that's the wrong spelling too . . . *checks* Aha! Onomatopoeia!
Re: Fallen
YES! What she said xD
I'm thinking about what you posted about first printing rights or whatever Shad...I might just post the first two chapters or something...
I'm thinking about what you posted about first printing rights or whatever Shad...I might just post the first two chapters or something...
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Sounds pretty cool, Snakey. I like it.
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Awesome start so far! I love it!
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Awesome! More?
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Cool!
Wheeereeee did you get the name Delaney from? XDD
Wheeereeee did you get the name Delaney from? XDD
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sounds cool so far I can't wait for the rest pm me when theres more!
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