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by Jesus4Eternity 6/11/2009, 1:59 pm
I don't know what to call this, but it's a random idea I had! Anyway.....
I walked into the line, sniffling occasionally. I was just getting over a recent cold, but I didn't care. I was about to meet Jackson Rathbone.
A cold wind blew towards us, and I sneezed. Why, of all days, did I have to be sick now? The line moved up slightly, and I took a step forward, acidentally running into the girl in front of me.
"Oh! I'm sorry!" My nasaly voice apologized. "That's fine." The girl turned around. Her mouth was turned up in a smile. "I'm Allison." She laughed. "Amanda." I replied, sniffling. "Are you alright? You seem sick." Her voice sounded concerned. "Yeah, I'm fine. Just a cold. You're sounding like Jasper. Protective." I laughed. "Well, you just acted like Bella." She replied. "Fine, we're even." I coughed twice, and we kept the conversation going.
Is it good?
I walked into the line, sniffling occasionally. I was just getting over a recent cold, but I didn't care. I was about to meet Jackson Rathbone.
A cold wind blew towards us, and I sneezed. Why, of all days, did I have to be sick now? The line moved up slightly, and I took a step forward, acidentally running into the girl in front of me.
"Oh! I'm sorry!" My nasaly voice apologized. "That's fine." The girl turned around. Her mouth was turned up in a smile. "I'm Allison." She laughed. "Amanda." I replied, sniffling. "Are you alright? You seem sick." Her voice sounded concerned. "Yeah, I'm fine. Just a cold. You're sounding like Jasper. Protective." I laughed. "Well, you just acted like Bella." She replied. "Fine, we're even." I coughed twice, and we kept the conversation going.
Is it good?
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I like it so far.
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Re: *No title Yet*
by Jesus4Eternity 6/15/2009, 9:05 pm
Guys, I'm closing this for personal reasons. I may open it/make a new thread later.
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