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Now Till Never *finished*

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Post by rattyjol 9/15/2009, 8:49 pm

Maturity: Love. But nothing beyond hand-holding.
Fantasy: None, except that it doesn't relate to me at all.

Now Till Never
Walking with you,
Your hand warm around mine.
Gentle as you playfully tug me along.
Faster
And faster
Until we’re racing down the street.
You’re mine,
Now till never.

Sitting with you,
Your voice soothing to my ears.
Pleasant to hear as you tell me about
Everything
And anything
Until there’s nothing about you I don’t know.
You’re mine,
Now till never.

Fighting with you,
Your mistakes plain to see.
Hurting as you point out mine.
Clearer
And clearer
Until there’s nothing more to say.
I’m alone,
Now till never.

Now till never
Equals forever.
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Post by Komoda 9/15/2009, 9:12 pm

Aw, that's really good! It's sad, though. ):
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Post by rattyjol 9/15/2009, 9:17 pm

Thanks! Smile I know, everything I write tends to end up depressing. XD
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Post by Komoda 9/15/2009, 9:56 pm

Ah, sometimes depressing poems are the best because they have lots of emotion. nod
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Post by rattyjol 9/15/2009, 9:58 pm

I guess... All my stories end up depressing too, though. XD I just like depressing stuff, I guess. nod
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Post by Nightowl 9/16/2009, 10:18 am

I like it. Good job!
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Post by rattyjol 9/16/2009, 10:34 am

Thanks. Wink
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 9/16/2009, 3:37 pm

Oh I liked how you finsished it!Smile.
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Post by shadowsowner888 9/16/2009, 5:51 pm

Aw. xD Sad ending. Awesome job!
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Post by Pokadottie 9/16/2009, 6:33 pm

Wow, that's amazing! Sad at the end, but really amazing.
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Post by rattyjol 9/16/2009, 7:17 pm

Thanks, guys. Smile
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 9/28/2009, 7:17 am

*agrees with everyone* Just hoping I didn't already post. XD
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Post by rattyjol 9/28/2009, 12:13 pm

Thanks, Mia. No, you didn't. XD
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