Now Till Never *finished*
+3
Nightowl
Komoda
rattyjol
7 posters
Page 1 of 1
Now Till Never *finished*
Maturity: Love. But nothing beyond hand-holding.
Fantasy: None, except that it doesn't relate to me at all.
Now Till Never
Walking with you,
Your hand warm around mine.
Gentle as you playfully tug me along.
Faster
And faster
Until we’re racing down the street.
You’re mine,
Now till never.
Sitting with you,
Your voice soothing to my ears.
Pleasant to hear as you tell me about
Everything
And anything
Until there’s nothing about you I don’t know.
You’re mine,
Now till never.
Fighting with you,
Your mistakes plain to see.
Hurting as you point out mine.
Clearer
And clearer
Until there’s nothing more to say.
I’m alone,
Now till never.
Now till never
Equals forever.
Fantasy: None, except that it doesn't relate to me at all.
Now Till Never
Walking with you,
Your hand warm around mine.
Gentle as you playfully tug me along.
Faster
And faster
Until we’re racing down the street.
You’re mine,
Now till never.
Sitting with you,
Your voice soothing to my ears.
Pleasant to hear as you tell me about
Everything
And anything
Until there’s nothing about you I don’t know.
You’re mine,
Now till never.
Fighting with you,
Your mistakes plain to see.
Hurting as you point out mine.
Clearer
And clearer
Until there’s nothing more to say.
I’m alone,
Now till never.
Now till never
Equals forever.
rattyjol- Best-Selling Author
- My TwigAdopts!
My DragCave Scroll!
Posts : 15981
Join date : 2009-06-08
Age : 28
Re: Now Till Never *finished*
Aw, that's really good! It's sad, though. ):
Komoda- Best-Selling Author
- Posts : 6275
Join date : 2009-07-13
Re: Now Till Never *finished*
Thanks! I know, everything I write tends to end up depressing. XD
rattyjol- Best-Selling Author
- My TwigAdopts!
My DragCave Scroll!
Posts : 15981
Join date : 2009-06-08
Age : 28
Re: Now Till Never *finished*
Ah, sometimes depressing poems are the best because they have lots of emotion.
Komoda- Best-Selling Author
- Posts : 6275
Join date : 2009-07-13
Re: Now Till Never *finished*
I guess... All my stories end up depressing too, though. XD I just like depressing stuff, I guess.
rattyjol- Best-Selling Author
- My TwigAdopts!
My DragCave Scroll!
Posts : 15981
Join date : 2009-06-08
Age : 28
Re: Now Till Never *finished*
I like it. Good job!
Nightowl- Novella Composer
- Posts : 1041
Join date : 2009-06-08
Age : 29
rattyjol- Best-Selling Author
- My TwigAdopts!
My DragCave Scroll!
Posts : 15981
Join date : 2009-06-08
Age : 28
Re: Now Till Never *finished*
Oh I liked how you finsished it!.
*Strongly*[Emo]tional- Best-Selling Author
- Posts : 16220
Join date : 2009-08-07
Age : 28
Re: Now Till Never *finished*
Wow, that's amazing! Sad at the end, but really amazing.
Pokadottie- Flash Fiction Scrawler
- Posts : 65
Join date : 2009-08-25
Re: Now Till Never *finished*
Thanks, guys.
rattyjol- Best-Selling Author
- My TwigAdopts!
My DragCave Scroll!
Posts : 15981
Join date : 2009-06-08
Age : 28
Re: Now Till Never *finished*
Thanks, Mia. No, you didn't. XD
rattyjol- Best-Selling Author
- My TwigAdopts!
My DragCave Scroll!
Posts : 15981
Join date : 2009-06-08
Age : 28
Similar topics
» Luv(Me)Pink~Shop Till We Drop
» Wrong *finished*
» You Are the Only One « finished
» What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
» Because (finished now)
» Wrong *finished*
» You Are the Only One « finished
» What It's Like to Be Alone *finished*
» Because (finished now)
Page 1 of 1
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum