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Post by Jesus4Eternity 9/18/2009, 10:55 pm

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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 9/18/2009, 10:56 pm

(Thank you, Amanda!)
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 9/18/2009, 10:56 pm

[Cool thanks!]
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Post by itachiphan8823 9/18/2009, 10:59 pm

(Thank you! I'll reply once I post this.)
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Post by itachiphan8823 9/18/2009, 11:02 pm

SasukeUchiha101 wrote:"All right. We'll do it tomorrow."

"Sounds like a plan," I said smiling. "Let's get this one to bed!"

OneTreeHill! wrote:Selena dropped to the floor and began crying.''I am sorry '' she kept saying over and over again.

"How could you?" I asked sadly. "How could you do that to me?" I left and went to our bed. I sat down on the edge, and looked at the torn up picture. She betrayed me, before we were even married!


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Post by Epileptic Lies 9/18/2009, 11:02 pm

[Thanks, Amanda Very Happy]

OneTreeHill! wrote:''Yeah is that gona bother you when Sammi askes all those questions because I know she will she is so easy to predict.'' Brooke said grinning.

"Nah, it's not going to bother me. Just amuse," Kei chuckled.

The doctor came in looking down. "Mr. & Mrs. Nara," he said a little down. "We tried everything we could...but nothing worked. I'm so sorry for your loss. I'll give you some time before I come back in." He exited.

I stared at the wall. I started breathing heavily. The walls melted down around me. Tears slowly fell from my eyes. This can't be happening! Our daughter can't be dead! My breathing started to get shorter. It wasn't long until the darkness enshrouded me. I started to bawl once more. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!" I screamed slamming my head into the wall. I collapsed on the floor bawling my eyes out. The universe stood still. It seemed as if time had been frozen. My baby's been taken away! Why?! I slammed my fists against the wall. Why us?! Why Konomi?! How was Ligia taking this? I tried to look at her, but all I seen was darkness. The world had slipped away around me. I was trapped in an endless pitch black oblivion.

(I got a little carried away! LOL)

"She's...dead...?" I stared into space, trying to click the words together. They just don't go together! How could a perfectly healthy baby be introduced to the world, ill? Shouldn't the ultrasonic scans have seen it? My tears were forming a river on the bed. "No, no, no, no, no, no, no," I whispered repeatedly. "I won't believe it! This is my child we are talking about! She's didn't die! She can't!"

[She's in denial XD]
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 9/18/2009, 11:03 pm

''Oh are you gona answer her?''Brooke asked looking at him.
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 9/18/2009, 11:04 pm

itachiphan8823 wrote:
SasukeUchiha101 wrote:"All right. We'll do it tomorrow."

"Sounds like a plan," I said smiling. "Let's get this one to bed!"

"All right. Let's go."
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 9/18/2009, 11:05 pm

itachiphan8823 wrote:
SasukeUchiha101 wrote:"All right. We'll do it tomorrow."

"Sounds like a plan," I said smiling. "Let's get this one to bed!"

OneTreeHill! wrote:Selena dropped to the floor and began crying.''I am sorry '' she kept saying over and over again.

"How could you?" I asked sadly. "How could you do that to me?" I left and went to our bed. I sat down on the edge, and looked at the torn up picture. She betrayed me, before we were even married!


Selena was crying her eyes out. She sat there with her head in her hands. Her shirt was getting wet.
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Post by itachiphan8823 9/18/2009, 11:06 pm

I continued to stare at the wall. It was as if I was staring into space. "She's dead," was all I kept on muttering to myself. "She's dead," I said tearfully. "She's dead," I said starting to bawl. "She's..." I lost it again. I slammed my head against the wall repeatedly. "It's my fault! It's me all me! I'm no good," I said slamming my head into the wall. Blood starting running down my face, mixing with the tears.
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Post by Epileptic Lies 9/18/2009, 11:07 pm

OneTreeHill! wrote:''Oh are you gona answer her?''Brooke asked looking at him.

"Maybe, maybe not," Kei stuck his tongue out in a silly manner.
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Post by itachiphan8823 9/18/2009, 11:09 pm

I put my arm around her, and lead her into the bedroom. "What happens if I roll on him?" I asked her nervously. "I'd crush his little body!"

I continued to stare at the photo. How could she do that to me? I've been faithful to her, ever since we met. Why couldn't she be faithful to me? Then I gasped. I walked into the bathroom. "Is Amber, or Daichi for that matter, even mine?!" I said in a harsh tone.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 9/18/2009, 11:10 pm

''Are you in pain write now? Do you hurt?''She said looking at him.
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 9/18/2009, 11:10 pm

"You won't. Don't worry." I walked into the bedroom with Yukio.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 9/18/2009, 11:11 pm

itachiphan8823 wrote:I put my arm around her, and lead her into the bedroom. "What happens if I roll on him?" I asked her nervously. "I'd crush his little body!"

I continued to stare at the photo. How could she do that to me? I've been faithful to her, ever since we met. Why couldn't she be faithful to me? Then I gasped. I walked into the bathroom. "Is Amber, or Daichi for that matter, even mine?!" I said in a harsh tone.


''Of course they are don't ask a question like that it is when we first met like when we weren't as serious and I just wanted to see how things went with us.''She said looking at him.
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Post by itachiphan8823 9/18/2009, 11:14 pm

I sat down on the ground and wrapped my arms around her. "Why didn't you tell me that!" I said. "Then you wouldn't be crying!" I wiped the tears away with my fingers. "That's all I wanted to know. You made it sound like you did that, when we were together." I explained.

I followed right behind her. "Are you sure?" I asked still nervous.
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 9/18/2009, 11:15 pm

"Of course! You didn't roll on Keitaro when he was a baby and we had him in our bed!" I laid Yukio on the bed and laid down beside him.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 9/18/2009, 11:15 pm

Selena looked at him...''No.'' She added. ''But I am mean we hung out togother when me and you where togother.''She said looking up at him.
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Post by itachiphan8823 9/18/2009, 11:17 pm

I looked at her shocked. "I don't remember Keitaro sleeping in our bed," I said lying down. I laid on the very edge of the bed.

"That's fine," I said. Then I looked into her eyes. "Did you do anything when you hung out with him?" I asked. "Please tell me the truth without sparing my feelings." I looked down. "I just need to know."
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 9/18/2009, 11:18 pm

''Kissed.''Selena said putting her hands over her face. She wanted to get the truth out.
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Post by Epileptic Lies 9/18/2009, 11:19 pm

OneTreeHill! wrote:''Are you in pain write now? Do you hurt?''She said looking at him.

"Huh? No, only when you touch it."

[Michael, did you reply? o_o]
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 9/18/2009, 11:19 pm

"Now why are you all the way over there."
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Post by itachiphan8823 9/18/2009, 11:20 pm

"Is that all?" I asked sternly. I didn't care that they kissed, but I didn't want her to know that.

"I don't want to roll on the baby," I told her.

(Yes I did Lyly. I might've missed your reply though. I'll go check.)
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Post by itachiphan8823 9/18/2009, 11:20 pm

(Last post on the first page Lyly!)
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 9/18/2009, 11:20 pm

"You won't, trust me."
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