Sick of It *finished*
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Sick of It *finished*
Maturity: PG
Fantasy: None
This I wrote for my friend. xD Not about her, though. Because it's about a "friend" of hers, and this totally werewolfy Spanish girly that's constantly harassing her verbally. And it came really easily; I wrote it in like ten minutes. I think I quite like drama!
Oh, and after you read it, please vote! x3
Fantasy: None
This I wrote for my friend. xD Not about her, though. Because it's about a "friend" of hers, and this totally werewolfy Spanish girly that's constantly harassing her verbally. And it came really easily; I wrote it in like ten minutes. I think I quite like drama!
Oh, and after you read it, please vote! x3
Always confrontation,
You just don't give a care.
Screaming, swearing, so ticked off,
While I just do not dare.
You cheat me and deceive me,
And leave me in your dust.
While I'm alone, without a home,
It makes me wanna cuss.
CHORUS
I'm sick of it, so sick of it,
I'm once and for all through.
You say you're sorry, but it's a lie,
It just leaves me so blue.
So I told you so, I told you so,
Just what I think of youuuuuuu!
. . .
Our friendship isn't true.
(end chorus)
What can I say to make you see
The kind of girl you are?
You're only around me to benefit you,
It's just not up to par.
You tear me down over again,
Giving me such doubts.
I don't know why I didn't say,
"You I can live withouuuuut!"
CHORUS
I'm sick of it, so sick of it,
I'm once and for all through.
You say you're sorry, but it's a lie,
It just leaves me so blue.
So I told you so, I told you so,
Just what I think of youuuu . . .
Our friendship isn't true.
BRIDGE
Well now you know what I've felt for so loooong.
The way you treat me is just sick and wroooong.
So go away and don't come back agaaaain,
Remaining friends is not part of my plan.
CHORUS
I'm sick of it, so sick of it,
I'm once and for all through.
You say you're sorry, but it's a lie,
It just leaves me so blue.
So I told you so, I told you so,
Just what I think of youuuu!
Our friendship isn't true!
[short outro]
You just don't give a care.
Screaming, swearing, so ticked off,
While I just do not dare.
You cheat me and deceive me,
And leave me in your dust.
While I'm alone, without a home,
It makes me wanna cuss.
CHORUS
I'm sick of it, so sick of it,
I'm once and for all through.
You say you're sorry, but it's a lie,
It just leaves me so blue.
So I told you so, I told you so,
Just what I think of youuuuuuu!
. . .
Our friendship isn't true.
(end chorus)
What can I say to make you see
The kind of girl you are?
You're only around me to benefit you,
It's just not up to par.
You tear me down over again,
Giving me such doubts.
I don't know why I didn't say,
"You I can live withouuuuut!"
CHORUS
I'm sick of it, so sick of it,
I'm once and for all through.
You say you're sorry, but it's a lie,
It just leaves me so blue.
So I told you so, I told you so,
Just what I think of youuuu . . .
Our friendship isn't true.
BRIDGE
Well now you know what I've felt for so loooong.
The way you treat me is just sick and wroooong.
So go away and don't come back agaaaain,
Remaining friends is not part of my plan.
CHORUS
I'm sick of it, so sick of it,
I'm once and for all through.
You say you're sorry, but it's a lie,
It just leaves me so blue.
So I told you so, I told you so,
Just what I think of youuuu!
Our friendship isn't true!
[short outro]
Last edited by shadowsowner888 on 9/28/2009, 10:37 am; edited 1 time in total
Re: Sick of It *finished*
I think the name "Sick of It" suits this song. It reminds me of a few people I know, in a way...
You did an awesome job of this one, Shadow! I think it's cool how you can write so well about your friend's experiences. You put so much emotion into it that it seems like this werewolfy chick is your friend.
You did an awesome job of this one, Shadow! I think it's cool how you can write so well about your friend's experiences. You put so much emotion into it that it seems like this werewolfy chick is your friend.
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Re: Sick of It *finished*
That was what I thought too, originally.
Thanks!! x3 I'm glad you think so! Haha, I feel like I know her, too . . . well, I know one of the peeps it was based on. xD Maybe the emotion was because I was really POed at the girls . . . the really did hurt Nat's feelings.
Thanks!! x3 I'm glad you think so! Haha, I feel like I know her, too . . . well, I know one of the peeps it was based on. xD Maybe the emotion was because I was really POed at the girls . . . the really did hurt Nat's feelings.
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Yeah, I get what you mean. I hate it when people are mean to my friends, too. Like in grade four when people bullied my best friend, Hayley. The bullied me too, but not half as bad as they did with her.
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Yeah . . . I get emotional easily. And I like it cus I get the songs out of it.
But it makes me wanna kill those werewolves. >.>
But it makes me wanna kill those werewolves. >.>
Re: Sick of It *finished*
Yes, I think it would be safer for us all if you sticked to being emotional through songs and didn't go on a killing rampage.
Komoda- Best-Selling Author
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Re: Sick of It *finished*
Quite.
It was a nice feeling, though, knowing I probably could have killed her if I wanted to. xD Cus she's sixteen, and I haven't seen her, but Nat says she's just super skinny. Which means no fat, but no muscle.
It was a nice feeling, though, knowing I probably could have killed her if I wanted to. xD Cus she's sixteen, and I haven't seen her, but Nat says she's just super skinny. Which means no fat, but no muscle.
Re: Sick of It *finished*
I agree, Sick of it sounds pretty good for it.
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Re: Sick of It *finished*
Sick of it. Omg! This reminds me of a girl I know!!! Haha.
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Re: Sick of It *finished*
That's really good! I voted for Sick of It.
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Re: Sick of It *finished*
Wow. xD Apparently I should trust my first ideas more, lol. I think Sick of It is the official name now, then. And thanks guys!
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