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Post by Noah the Flood 10/23/2009, 10:50 pm

(Actually, he's 14, forgot about the extra year. But anyway..uhm..can you start?)
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Post by The Mad Hatter 10/23/2009, 10:52 pm

Alice suddenly appeared behind him, her pale hands covering his eyes, "Boo." She said into his ear, laughing.

~*~

Hannah fell silent for a moment, pondering. She then quietly counted on her small hand, "One, two, tree, four.... four!" She announced, giggling like a little girl who had just got caught doing something bad.

Sophia turned pink, "Hannah!" She laughed, picking up the little girl, "You little ninja." She said with a grin, tickling her tummy.
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Post by popcornkernel 10/23/2009, 10:52 pm

Leon quickly grabbed the too-hard-to-safely-eat loaf of bread and stuck the whole thing in his mouth. “Meh fam’y? ‘Ot ‘uch ‘oo ‘ell. Bey uh, ae, um—” He said through a mouthful of stale bread.
Griffen rolled his eyes. “Just forget it! Okay, you don’t want to tell me. Fine!” He said, sounding disgusted.
Leo at least had the dignity to look embarrassed. “So’ey,” he was able to say around a loaf of bread.
Griffen glared at him and looked like he was going to say some scathing remark when a light almost hesitant knocking came at their door. He threw Leon one more glare and walked towards the door. “I might as well answer it since you can’t even talk right.” Leo stared down at his feet, chewing glumly. He shouldn’t have stuffed so much bread in his mouth at one time. Already the crunchiness and gooeyness one gets from stale bread at the same time was making him feel sick.
That’s what you get Leo for trying to hide it! Flower thought back to him in a sing-song voice.
Leon ignored her and continued chewing, a grimace stretched across his face.
Meanwhile, Griffen was already at the door. He sighed and pulled open the door and couldn’t hold back a gasp. Standing only a foot in front of him was a tan girl with wavy brown hair to her mid-back. She smiled at him and stuck out her hand. She instantly her hand dropped with a gasp and pulled out something from her pocket. She laughed breezily.
“Hi. I’m Brixy Knight. Um, I’m sorta new so Miss. Frost told me to uh, come here for help. You are—” She looked down at a sheet of paper that looked very well worn from handling. “Goo—Gooack—Goacki…” Brixy stumbled over his last name like so many other people had. Finally she just stopped and a reddish color spread across her face.
Griffen felt his face flush. He opened his mouth to say something and closed it immediately. What are you doing?! You are acting like an idiot! he yelled at himself. Something inside of him clicked when he saw Brixy. She was perhaps the most beautiful thing in the world—apart from Herwhi of course. His tongue felt like it was tied into those quadruple knots he learned how to tie in Boy Scouts all those long years ago and all of a sudden his palms were sweating. He probably would have just stood there and the two of them would have shared that awkward moment longer had Leon not half-limped into the conversation when he did. He held up one finger and pointed to his mouth. Brixy waited patiently as Leon swallowed and politely giggled at his expression as he swallowed one last time. He cleared his throat and introduced everyone around but forgetting to mention himself. Griffen wasn’t exactly in a state though to say anything about it. He was too busy trying to figure out how to speak English again.
“Yes, Miss Knight. This is Griffen Guackomoli who Miss. Frost probably sent you too” Leon said, pointing to the still red Griffen. He shot Leo a look of gratitude and nodded.
Brixy smiled and turned back to Griffen. “So Mr. Guackomoli—”
“Griffen. You can call me Griffen.” He was finally able to sprout out those few words but even they had raised an extra octave at the end.
“So Griffen,” Brixy started again, her smile growing wider. “Miss. Frost said to come to you about finding a place to stay and getting a dragon. Are you the right person?”
Griffen shrugged. “Apparently I’m now the welcoming committee here at the DE—Dragon Emporium.” He said and corrected himself after Brixy looked confused at his acronym. “I should be able to find you a place though.” He winked at her the same way Eduardo had winked at him when he first heard about the DE. Finally his voice was back to its normal pitch and the red across his face was evaporating.
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Post by Dragon Lover 10/23/2009, 10:52 pm

Rosie poked at her father's leg. She started giggling, then she hid out of site beneath his chair. She waited a few seconds, then her hand snaked up and she poked him again. Giggling almost hysterically the child sat down, her eyes round with excitement.

~!~

I squeezed his hand, my eyes wide, "And?" I whispered, leaning forward, eager, afraid, and a bunch other feelings.

{*puts hands on hips* Poppishcornkernal! xD When areeee you gonna tell us? I don't mind the wait, I just wanna know WHEN. nod}

~!~

{Uhm...xD I can't remember if I have anyone around that age, Fwp! DANG!}
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Post by Cyn431 10/23/2009, 11:02 pm

(Actually, he's 14, forgot about the extra year. But anyway..uhm..can you start?)
[Oh, yeah, me too... So Claudia's 11, Danny's 14. nod And KK!]

Claudia was sitting on a garden bench, a sketch pad resting on her lap. Soft grey lines slowly decorated the blank sheet of white as Claudia glanced from an object to her pad every now and then. This object was a daisy, her skin almost as white as its petals.

{Uhm...xD I can't remember if I have anyone around that age, Fwp! DANG!}
[xD Um... Anyone who was fifteen, fourteen or sixteen on the WI DE, would probably be in that range?]
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Post by Noah the Flood 10/23/2009, 11:05 pm

Noah played along, and gasped "Oh, what could that be?" he asked, looking around with a smile on his face.
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Post by Cyn431 10/23/2009, 11:06 pm

Hannah fell silent for a moment, pondering. She then quietly counted on
her small hand, "One, two, tree, four.... four!" She announced,
giggling like a little girl who had just got caught doing something
bad.

Sophia turned pink, "Hannah!" She laughed, picking up the
little girl, "You little ninja." She said with a grin, tickling her
tummy.
Jasper's own skin took on a slightly rosy hue. "My gosh," he breathed, somewhat amazed by Hannah's memory.
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Post by Dragon Lover 10/23/2009, 11:06 pm

{Omigod, I love Brixy. xD Though slightly airheadish, she's like perfect! And I literally awhhed when I read what had happened about him thinking she was beautiful...xD}

{Hey, you, *pokes Pop* Are you gonna post your story on here? In the story section? Or are you gonna hide it away forever? xD}
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Post by popcornkernel 10/23/2009, 11:07 pm

Ḋᴚӑԍӫӥ Ļ♥️ṽᶓᴚᴚ wrote:
I squeezed his hand, my eyes wide, "And?" I whispered, leaning forward, eager, afraid, and a bunch other feelings.

{*puts hands on hips* Poppishcornkernal! xD When areeee you gonna tell us? I don't mind the wait, I just wanna know WHEN. nod}

The young man sighs. "And I opened my eyes. At first, all I see is red. I'm convinced it's my blood. Then..." He hesitated again. "I see my brother falling on the ground in front of me. He knew his wound was fatal...he knew he wasn't going to make it so he gathered up his last strength and threw himself in front of Enid's blade." The man gave a hiccupy laugh. "If the idiot would've hung on for one more moment instead of jumping instead of the sword, he'd be here talking to you instead of me. He deserves to be here more than me." The man's shadowed eyes were cast downward. He looked back up into Brixy's face. "The other Students fought off Enid and his Slayers and they left. But not soon enough to watch my brother die." The man moaned and rubbed his eyes. "I watched my brother sink to his knees. I saw the fatal wound right below his heart. I squeezed his hand, forcing him to live through death. I saw his face lose all of its color and I saw his white shirt become a soaked red." Tears glistened in the young man's eyes. "I saw his eyes flutter closed and I heard his last words."
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Post by Noah the Flood 10/23/2009, 11:09 pm

Danny walked quietly through the garden with his hands stuck in his pockets until he came upon a familiar looking girl.."Claudia? Is that you?"
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Post by popcornkernel 10/23/2009, 11:11 pm

Ḋᴚӑԍӫӥ Ļ♥️ṽᶓᴚᴚ wrote:{Omigod, I love Brixy. xD Though slightly airheadish, she's like perfect! And I literally awhhed when I read what had happened about him thinking she was beautiful...xD}

{Hey, you, *pokes Pop* Are you gonna post your story on here? In the story section? Or are you gonna hide it away forever? xD}
(Really? You like her?)
(It's fun, in the book, both she and Crys don't seem to enjoy Leo. Actually, everyone some point in time seems to hate Leo. Brixy didn't like him especially after she found Si's power)
(No way am I posting this thing on line!!!!)


(
Brixy Knight was standing in the middle of the hall, water dripping all over her, and a scowl on her pretty face. Shards of some plate were scattered around her feet and something wet and soggy was lying at her feet. Amid all the chaos was a grinning Sirius. Sirius was Brixy’s recently hatched dragon. He was already the size of Flower despite being a year younger. A white star sat upon the top of his magnificent black head like a crown. No one had figured out his power—until now of course. Griffen snapped his gaze back to Brixy. Black mascara lines poured from her eyes and it wasn’t till Griffen heard her sob that she was crying as well.
“Brixy!” Griffen shouted, running up to her. He grabbed her hands and held them softly.
“What happened?” Leon asked, coming up behind Griffen at his normally slow pace. “You look like…well, you look like crap. Did you walk through a carwash?”
Griffen shot him a glare and Leon shrugged. It was an honest question.
Brixy didn’t seem to notice. She just pulled one hand away and wiped at her eyes. “Oh. Well, part of it is good news. The other part... not so much. The good news is Sirius found his power. He can control weather. He made it rain over me a few minutes ago. But that’s not the bad news.”
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Post by Dragon Lover 10/23/2009, 11:14 pm

{*sticks tongue out* Fiiiine, be that way. xD}

I pulled him into a hug, not liking the way he was acting, the way he was looking, the tears. I hugged him tight, shutting my eyes a little. "What were his last words?" I breathed. Why were my cheeks so cold?
Oh. I was crying, too.

{I might g2g soon, so, nvm, Fwp. Is that okay? It's like 11 heer, sooo..xD}

~!~

Rosie giggled again and this time jumped out. "BOO!" she squealed, throwing her arms in the air.

~!~

{*nods* Yes! she's awesome, =))}
{LOL! xD Poor Leo!}
{*nods* Will you at least let some certain special BFFLs read a bit more than just excerpts someday? x)}

{LOL! GO SIRI! Very Happy}
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Post by popcornkernel 10/23/2009, 11:21 pm

(Mmmm, I might let you read more I suppose.... I'm not sure xD)
(I tried to capture Si's ... 'energy' in the chapters. I don't think I was able to get all of it.)

The man let Brixy hug him yet he felt no comfort from it. He sighed again, feeling the words choking him. He could still hear the words as his brother rasped them out, his eyes wide with pain. "He said..." The man started again. "My brother's last words were 'I forgive you...'--" The man stopped. He closed his eyes and whishpered the last bit.
"Griffen."
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Post by Noah the Flood 10/23/2009, 11:21 pm

"AhhhH!" Noah laughed, pretending to be scared.
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Post by popcornkernel 10/23/2009, 11:21 pm

(Gawd. Isn't that depressing? I get my 100th post talking about death)
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Post by Cyn431 10/23/2009, 11:27 pm

{I might g2g soon, so, nvm, Fwp. Is that okay? It's like 11 heer, sooo..xD}
[Ah, I see, xD Yeah it's fine by me! I need to retype a self-RP I accidentally just deleted too, so... Hehe...]

The man let Brixy hug him yet he felt no comfort from it. He sighed
again, feeling the words choking him. He could still hear the words as
his brother rasped them out, his eyes wide with pain. "He said..." The
man started again. "My brother's last words were 'I forgive you...'--"
The man stopped. He closed his eyes and whishpered the last bit.
"Griffen."

(Gawd. Isn't that depressing? I get my 100th post talking about death)
(Lovely)
[I KNEW IT! Razz]
[And yes, it is very depressing, nod]


Danny walked quietly through the garden with his hands stuck in his
pockets until he came upon a familiar looking girl.."Claudia? Is that
you?"
Claudia circled the first bud of the daisy's center when she heard her name. Her silver eyes glanced up from her drawing to see a boy, older than herself by a few years. She nodded slowly as she searched through her memories for this familiar face. "Yes--um..." Then it came to her. "Danny?"
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Post by Dragon Lover 10/23/2009, 11:27 pm

{*gasps* SO IT IS GRIFF that she's talking to!?!}

I started crying, too. "I'm sorry," I mumbled, pulling away and putting my head in my hands. "I--I wish I could have--helped--" I continued crying.

{And, pleeease let me read more? xD I'd love it, so so much! =))}

{If you ever need help with that, pop....! Wink}

!~!

Rosie fell over laughing. "Daddy!" she squealed, clapping her little hands.
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Post by Cyn431 10/23/2009, 11:28 pm

[DL, remember, it could be Enid... o.O... ]
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Post by Dragon Lover 10/23/2009, 11:29 pm

{If it was Enid, I'd....I'd laugh. xD}
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Post by Noah the Flood 10/23/2009, 11:30 pm

"Rosie!" He said in the same tone picking her up in his arms and laughing

~!~

"Yeah! Its me!! Its been so long!" he laughed, jogging over.
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Post by Dragon Lover 10/23/2009, 11:31 pm

Rosie laughed so hard there were little tears coming down her cheeks. "Daddy," she gasped, her eyes wide. She clasped her hands and just said Daddy several more times, starting to giggle again.
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Post by Noah the Flood 10/23/2009, 11:34 pm

Noah laughed, tickling her stomach. He felt so proud..just holding Rosie.
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Post by popcornkernel 10/23/2009, 11:34 pm

(Have you guys figured out who died?)
(FWP, don't deny it. You know who it is.)
(Told ya I know what would happen with Leo and Crys)
(I really hate myself right now. I really do.)
(Theres no going back. I just killed my favorite character off.)
(Stupid me!)

Griffen sighed, (whooo, it is a releif to be talking in normal person now!). "I don't think there was anything you could've done to save him. When he moved to block Enid's blow, the Doc said he had popped an artery or something. He was going to die anyway. THe only way he might still be alive is if he layed on the floor the whole time and watched. And I doubt the Big Guy Upstairs himself can stop Leo from doing something when he sets his mind to it. He's just so darn stubborn." Griffen gave a weak smile.
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Post by popcornkernel 10/23/2009, 11:38 pm

(I'm like really upset right now. I can't believe I just did that)
(I'm going into shock!)
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Post by Dragon Lover 10/23/2009, 11:38 pm

Rosie laughed hysterically again and tried to kick away her hands with her tiny feet, tears streaming down her cheeks again. "NO!" she cried.

~!~

{I seriously almost cried. =( But I'm kinda happy Griff's here but....really sad Leo's gone. =((}

I was sobbing though. Leo had been...I don't know how to describe it. He'd just been Leo. And that, trust me, is hard to describe. I nodded a little and pressed my face into his shirt, partially because being close gave me a bubbly feeling, but also because I just needed some form of comfort.
I wished it was like the old-days again. When I liked Griff and he at least sort of liked me back. When Leo was somewhat hooked up with Crys and we were friends and Derrick was constantly hurting himself and Sirius was always raining on my parade--most of the time, literally.
Now everything was just....just....screwed up. Big time.
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