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Post by xSophiexx16 10/5/2009, 3:33 pm

I don't know what inspired this poem.
I don't know why I wrote this poem.
and I'm not even sure I know what it's about.
I'm confused about it myself.
But.. here it is.


The Place
This home he owns
Is filled with rainbows
And ice cream cones,
With no friends nor foes.

It’s a nice place to be,
Away from the bad outside
There’s no pain nor misery.
Nobody has lived nor died.

It’s a place of distant dreams.
You don’t know what’s going on.
There are no sides nor teams.
Nobody has lost nor won.

Everything is even-
Everything the same.
Only one thing to believe in.
No pride nor shame.

It’s a place with no thoughts.
Very odd, indeed.
With adults and little tots.
No tantrums nor greed.

Although the place sounds nice.
All things we’d do with ease.
We all must pay a price.
To do everything we please.

So, I think it’s only right.
To stay where you are.
And earn your happy light,
instead of moving to the place afar.



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Post by shadowsowner888 10/5/2009, 6:50 pm

It's got a light mood, but the poem is very thought-provoking. nod Nice job!
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Post by Arianna 10/6/2009, 1:29 am

That's awesome, Sophie! You're really good at rhyming Smile
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Post by rattyjol 10/6/2009, 10:56 am

That's awesome! Smile Great job.
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Post by xSophiexx16 10/6/2009, 12:21 pm

Thanks, Everybody (:

For the "believe in" and "even" rhyme- I needed to use rhymezone. Very Happy
I really wanted to keep the even and same part- but I couldn't find a rhyme for even.
So after 20 minutes of thinking- I went to rhymezone. XD
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