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Secretly in love- a book I wrote in third grade! ;D

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Post by Moony 10/24/2009, 5:29 pm

A book I wrote in third grade. It is OK, but not the best piece I've done.


Chapter 1-

Annabelle and Lily sat in a fluffy armchair in the stuffed animal's side of Santa's Workshop. Annabelle was a light blue teddy bear, and Lily was a tiger.
"When is it going to end, and we can live in peace?!" asked Lily, half to herself. The king of Doll Town, and the President of Stuffed Animal Village were having some issues. Stuffed animals were wanted more then dolls around Christmas, and the dolls wanted to get rid of them. Many dolls got ripped by Lily and her family. Annabelle spotted Bob in Doll Town; Bob was Annabelle's secret crush. He glared at Lily, who had ripped his aunt and uncle to shreads. His gaze softenned when it met Annabelle's eyes. He kept on working.
"He is WEIRD. I don't even know why he cares if I did that to his aunt and uncle! They tried to kill him" said Lily quietly. Lily was a bit more.. outgoing, then Annabelle. Annabelle usally prepared people for battles, and worked in one of the hospitals.
"Y-Yeah.." said Annabelle, noiticing a strange piece of sparkly stuff.
"I am going to go get ready for dinner, I will see you at your house, Lily!" Annabelle deicided, getting out of her chair. She followed the sparkle to the border of Doll Town. It turned into a cat-fairy.

* More coming soon *
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Post by catbuster 10/24/2009, 10:11 pm

Neat, sounds pretty cool so far.
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Post by shadowsowner888 10/25/2009, 9:52 am

This is good so far!! Smile I hope you'll add more soon; I wanna see what happens.
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/22/2009, 1:30 am

Interesting... I really want to see more, and find out where it's going! x]
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