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Force a Smile

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Post by Dragon Lover 11/12/2009, 7:04 pm

Force a Smile
A song/poem written by myself, H. A. Sparrow
Force a smile,
Hold back the tears,
For a while,
Til the pain disappears.
Nothing in the world will
Take it away,
Right away,
Right now.
Right away,
Right now.
The daily struggles in
Life seems
Too much.
Things don't make sense,
I wish I could just!
Sprout wings,
Take flight,
And go, ah-way-ay.
Right away,
Right now.
Right away,
Right now, oh.
It's amazing
Which straw break's
The camel's back.
It's amazing
How I tend to react.
How I manage to smile
And forget it all
Just in time to say hello
To my friends, one an all.
But I wish I could just
Run away,
Right away,
Without looking back.
Right away,
Right now,
Without a second thought.
Right away,
Right,
Right,
Right....
Right now.
It's impossible, however,
I'd feel so bad.
That's me for you;
I'd feel so, bad!
So for now,
I will
Force a smile,
Hold back the tears.
For a while,
'Til the pain, disappears.
Nothing in the world can
Take it away,
right now,
right away,
right now,
right away.
Right now,
Right,
Away...
Hey, hey, hey,
Hey, hey, hey....
Right now,
Right away...
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Post by Noah the Flood 11/12/2009, 7:13 pm

Amazing Smile
And *hugs*
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Post by Dragon Lover 11/12/2009, 7:14 pm

=] Thankyou!
*is hugged*
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/12/2009, 7:33 pm

Awwww. That's so sad! I really like this - and it's cool how you repeat the "right away, right now" stuff after every stanza. ;3
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Post by Dragon Lover 11/12/2009, 7:38 pm

Funny thing is, I don't believe I was even that sad when I wrote it. xD But, thank you! =]]]
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/12/2009, 7:46 pm

Lol, nice. xDD Swelcome!
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/19/2009, 1:57 am

That's sooo sad! Force a Smile Icon_sad Wow, that made me tear up a bit (which isn't hard, but ya know xD) Awesomeness! (:
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Post by Dragon Lover 11/19/2009, 6:01 pm

Thank you! And sorry for making you teary. xD
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/19/2009, 6:03 pm

You are most welcome! xP
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Post by webbff 1/31/2010, 1:00 pm

this is great!
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Post by Dragon Lover 1/31/2010, 5:26 pm

Thank you. =]
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Post by wolflover96 2/4/2010, 8:10 pm

this one is interesting...like a song
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