She's the one, I'm sure of it. *Not finished* --Finally updated--
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Re: She's the one, I'm sure of it. *Not finished* --Finally updated--
Aw, c'mon, that's too short. We need moooooore!
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True. XD I'll write more later today.
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Yay!
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Is it later yet?
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Is it later yet?
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~Chapter 15~
Elyssa entered the office, Jess behind her. Mr. Lem sat down and nodded to the red velvet chairs in his office. They sat down at the edge of the chairs, hands in their laps. Mr. Lem looked from one to the other. "Girls, what you did was wrong, but I understand why you've done it. However, you cannot go unpunished." Jess looked at the floor, her face white. Elyssa nodded, she knew they had to be punished. "So, I've decided, if you think it's 'funny' to make a mess, you can clean up your mess and everyone else too. For a month." Elyssa and Jess looked down, afraid of where this was going. "So, I'd like to introduce you to a few people you may not know. He opened the door and two women and a man entered. The two ladies were rather large with nets over their hair. The guy looked grungy and dirty, his pants and shirt stained. He had rough, worn leather shoes and he seemed to be bald. "Who are they?" Jess whispered under her breath to nobody in particular. Elyssa shrugged, she had no idea. "These," Mr. Lem started, "are the staff that nobody respects. The culinary staff and the equipment engineer." To Elyssa, those sounded like fancy names for lunch ladies and the janitor. "So, in the mornings, you will help the lunch ladies prepare the day's food and after school, you'll help the janitor clean up the school." Jess groaned inwardly and Elyssa hunched her shoulders forward, this sounded horrible, cleaning and cooking, without pay, just for black paint stains in one bathroom? Couldn't they just clean the bathroom? Apparently not. "You'll start tomorrow." Mr. Lem said, beckoning to the door. The two girls exited the office and headed to class, whispering to each other.
Elyssa entered the office, Jess behind her. Mr. Lem sat down and nodded to the red velvet chairs in his office. They sat down at the edge of the chairs, hands in their laps. Mr. Lem looked from one to the other. "Girls, what you did was wrong, but I understand why you've done it. However, you cannot go unpunished." Jess looked at the floor, her face white. Elyssa nodded, she knew they had to be punished. "So, I've decided, if you think it's 'funny' to make a mess, you can clean up your mess and everyone else too. For a month." Elyssa and Jess looked down, afraid of where this was going. "So, I'd like to introduce you to a few people you may not know. He opened the door and two women and a man entered. The two ladies were rather large with nets over their hair. The guy looked grungy and dirty, his pants and shirt stained. He had rough, worn leather shoes and he seemed to be bald. "Who are they?" Jess whispered under her breath to nobody in particular. Elyssa shrugged, she had no idea. "These," Mr. Lem started, "are the staff that nobody respects. The culinary staff and the equipment engineer." To Elyssa, those sounded like fancy names for lunch ladies and the janitor. "So, in the mornings, you will help the lunch ladies prepare the day's food and after school, you'll help the janitor clean up the school." Jess groaned inwardly and Elyssa hunched her shoulders forward, this sounded horrible, cleaning and cooking, without pay, just for black paint stains in one bathroom? Couldn't they just clean the bathroom? Apparently not. "You'll start tomorrow." Mr. Lem said, beckoning to the door. The two girls exited the office and headed to class, whispering to each other.
Told you, it's a fail. XD
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That sounds terrible. Come early, stay late, and do gross jobs. XD
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Meh, doesn't sound too bad.
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Yeah, I couldn't think of anything. XD
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I'll be posting more sometime soon..
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Kool! I love it write more soon OR ELSE
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writewritewritewriteiwantmoreiwantmoreiwantmoreiwantmorewritemorewritemoremoremore!!!!!!!
Translation: Write, write, write! I want more- write more!
Translation: Write, write, write! I want more- write more!
Re: She's the one, I'm sure of it. *Not finished* --Finally updated--
Hey WL1! I havent talked to you in ages! Anyway, this is really good!
Re: She's the one, I'm sure of it. *Not finished* --Finally updated--
Thanks guys, but I'm kinda stuck on the story. I know they should start being punished, but I don't really know how to start it.
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~Chapter 16~
Elyssa plopped down on her bed after school, over an hour after school. She and Jess had been helping the janitor clean the bathrooms, disgusting! She dragged her cell phone from her bedside table and called John. "Hey," she said to his voice machine. "Just wanted to see what you were doing, haven't talked to you for a while," she murmured, ending the message, a pang in her heart, what if John had moved on? She shrugged, if he did, she should have expected it. But, to Elyssa's relief, half an hour later, John called her back. "Hey," he said, "sorry I missed your call, I was busy." Elyssa laughed halfheartedly, "That makes sense." Their conversation continued, until, John had to go, but at least they had set up another date. A ripple of warmth spread through Elyssa, making her grin, as she pushed the 'End' button. Though she had been doing nasty jobs all day with complete strangers (other than Jess), she felt like she couldn't be happier.
(Haven't updated for a LONG time. o: )
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That was a nice chappie! x3 I can't wait to see what happens on their date.
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cool new chapppie!! I can't wait to see what there date goes like.
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I love this! I read the first chapter a LONG time ago. Wasn't this posted on WI? Well, I'm digging it! Add more!
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Re: She's the one, I'm sure of it. *Not finished* --Finally updated--
Actually, it wasn't on WI, Lauren, but thanks.
However, I'm not sure if I'll be continuing it or not.
However, I'm not sure if I'll be continuing it or not.
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Hmm... I could have sworn it was. xD No problem.
It's totally your choice if you want to continue it. I think you did the same thing I always do. You worked yourself into a position that you can't get out of now.
It's totally your choice if you want to continue it. I think you did the same thing I always do. You worked yourself into a position that you can't get out of now.
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