What Is This Feeling? Parody *unfinished WITH MORE ADDED!*

by **Cyn431** 12/3/2009, 10:30 pm

Maturity: murder [o.O xD], mentioning of blood, mentioning of wife and husband, a deathly old wives' tale...
Fantasy: moderate-low-ish

A couple friends and I are writing and performing a murderous Christmas skit. This is one of the songs I'm working for, as I plan it to be the theme song. nod

Gladly, it is appropriate for the site.
It's a really suckish and not-creative rough draft. xP Edited to not release any personal info. Also, any harmony is not added in, as I have not plotted that either.

Wife: [spoken] *on phone* Detective Morris?
D.M.: Yes, what's wrong? [/spoken]
Wife: There's been some suspicion looming over Michigan [this flows better in the true version, which reveals P.I.]
But of course I've cared for Damon [temporary name]
And of course all the doors are locked
For I know that's all a good housewife would do, *yes!*
There's been some suspicion for you see lately there's been
An unusually and exceedingly peculiar flock of vultures in the sky
[spoken] Oh, and blood [/spoken]

D.M.: What is this feeling, so morbid [?] --
Wife: [spoken] And how! [/spoken]
D.M.: I had the moment when you called me just now.
Wife: My pulse is rushing
D.M.: My fear's increasing [?]
Wife: My face is flushing
Both: What is this feeling?
Just like mutilate,
Does it have a name?
Yes...

Wife: *screams MURDER!*
D.M.: Unadulterated murder.
Wife: From the birds
D.M.: The blood
Wife: [spoken] Oh, the horror! [/spoken]
Both: Let's just say
I fear the worst
Wife: Oh, he warned me that this house was cursed
D.M.: Well, at least it's good you called me first

With such a bloody murder
Wife: There's a thought that makes me wither
And a chill that sends me shivers
It's so dark, so cold
Both: Even if it's wrong,
A false alarm
Still we should be sure
There's been no harm
D.M.: And I will be searching
'Til the killer's paid his toll
[spoken] I'm on my way! [/spoken]

And that's all I have so far. xP I have planned what will happen next, I just don't know how to put it in lyrics right now.

by **rattyjol** 12/4/2009, 1:28 am

Ooh... Sounds awesome. Very Happy

by **shadowsowner888** 12/4/2009, 6:54 pm

Lol, that sure sounds interesting! xD

by **Cyn431** 12/4/2009, 7:13 pm

Thanks, Ratty, smiley

Yes, the key word is "interesting." xD

by **shadowsowner888** 12/4/2009, 9:19 pm

Lawlz. xD Funny, too. I'd wanna see it if I knew you!

by **Komoda** 12/4/2009, 9:48 pm

Omg, this totally seems like something that would be in a musical! It reminds me of this song that my friend showed me... I can't remember what it's called, though.

Anyway, awesome! I love it. Smile

by **Cyn431** 12/4/2009, 11:23 pm

Lawlz. xD Funny, too. I'd wanna see it if I knew you!

Funny? *looks up* Hehe, with work, it could be funny! cheesy

Omg, this totally seems like something that would be in a musical! It
reminds me of this song that my friend showed me... I can't remember
what it's called, though.

Anyway, awesome! I love it.

Thanks--
Ooh, it does? You might be thinking of the original from Wicked, but IDK... Maybe she parodied it, but since I don't stalk you [not that I stalk anybody hehe... *guilty look*] I wouldn't know.

Again, thanksies, Very Happy

by **Cyn431** 12/17/2009, 7:50 pm

Yay, I got more done! grin

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