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Re: Lucky ~~ All of chapter 7 added 6/1!
Okay. I'm getting distracted by Idol, too. xD
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I LIKED IT!! It twas good but I don't really know who she should be with XD
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Re: Lucky ~~ All of chapter 7 added 6/1!
xD I'm glad you like it.
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Wow. Very very good.
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Thank you.
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I added more! Not my best chapter, but tell me what you think.
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Cool, I like it! Even though it wasn't very eventful but I liked it!
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Thanks. Yup, it's not that great, but I needed to add the characters in.
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I don't think I quite like these families. xD They seem annoying.
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They're all really annoying people. xD You'll see...
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Who is ready for more? Hehe.
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Re: Lucky ~~ All of chapter 7 added 6/1!
What did you think?
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Duuuude. xD People are jerks. Toni . . . needs, like, a free face transplant! Then all her problems will go away, and the people will stop being jerks.
I liked it! ^^ Good job! I think this chapter felt a little rushed, though. xD
I liked it! ^^ Good job! I think this chapter felt a little rushed, though. xD
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xD Well, there's more to the chapter.
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Bah, sorry for the late response but the 4th chapter was great! And I don't like Cole he seems not nice >.>
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Hmm, I predict a possible romance with Toni and Cole ^-^ Great story, written very realistically, I'll be checking back often.
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Re: Lucky ~~ All of chapter 7 added 6/1!
Thanks!
I added more.
I know it sounds... stupid (lame?) but Lucky is my first story over 10000 words! Right now I'm at 10150. I'm so happy.
I added more.
I know it sounds... stupid (lame?) but Lucky is my first story over 10000 words! Right now I'm at 10150. I'm so happy.
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That's not lame, Pugs, that's awesome. x3 Congrats!
The new part was awesome. x3 I love Lucas. He's hilarous. And I was cracking up so bad when I read this line:
The new part was awesome. x3 I love Lucas. He's hilarous. And I was cracking up so bad when I read this line:
I want to paint nails, but Lucas would run away screaming
Re: Lucky ~~ All of chapter 7 added 6/1!
Thanks. There's a funny line with Lucas in chapter 7, I think. xD
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LOL, I loved the rest of chapter 4!!! Ouch, Toni has some fixin to do. And Lucas is really funny XD!
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Adding more!
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YIKES! Toni is really screwing it up, but I loved it anyways.
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