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Post by xSophiexx16 1/29/2010, 12:02 am

La la la... Maturity: None? Fantasy: None?
Anywhoo.. There's really no resolution and it's just about somebody who is emotionless. Yippee. x)



Emotionless

When you move there’s no motion.
You have no heart.
Your cries have no emotion
We’re better apart.

You don’t have a background.
I don’t understand a word you say.
Your eyes are blank and distant.
It makes me farther from you every day.

Why are you callous?
Is there no hope inside of you?
Maybe you’re just full of malice.
Any emotion will do.

I want you gone from my life,
But your cold hands just cling.
Can you just leave me alone?
So many sleepless nights you bring.
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Post by Tolly12bells 1/29/2010, 1:07 am

O.o Very good... Leaves me kind of speechless...
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Post by xSophiexx16 1/29/2010, 12:06 pm

Really? Very Happy
Thank you (:


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Post by shadowsowner888 1/29/2010, 5:33 pm

Duude . . . that makes me wanna pound whoever's holding onto the MC. xD Lovely job!! :3 It's very good.
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Post by xSophiexx16 1/29/2010, 7:53 pm

XD
*hands over whoever's holding onto the MC*
You may pound them.


Thank ya!
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/30/2010, 10:36 am

YAH!!! Very Happy *raises fists to pound*

Largo - *grabs Shadow's fists* Wait.

Whyyy . . . ? xP

Because . . . I wanna ask . . . can I help? What a Face

YEAHHH!

Largo and Shad: *drag dude off to pound him*
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Post by Arianna 1/30/2010, 11:08 am

But I was gonna hit him, Shadow. No fair!

*cowers in corner* But if you're the one doing it, you know, I'll be fine anyway. * whistles*
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/30/2010, 12:25 pm

Largo - *looks at Ari, then grins, holding up a giant goalie stick*

No, Largo, no! *yanks stick from his hands* Ari's our friend.

Aww. >.>
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Post by xSophiexx16 1/30/2010, 3:15 pm

XD

I was thinking the person who was clinging to the MC was a woman and the MC was man. x)
I was inspired by the song "For No One"... so, it was in the perspective of a guy.

If you're hitting 'him' - you're hitting an innocent guy with relationship issues.
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/31/2010, 9:48 am

Oh, oops . . . o.o . . .

. . . DIE! *continues pounding dude*
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Post by xSophiexx16 1/31/2010, 3:02 pm

XD .
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Post by LuckyPenny666 1/31/2010, 3:16 pm

Wow. This is really...deep. I really like it!!
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Post by xSophiexx16 1/31/2010, 3:23 pm

LuckyPenny666 wrote:Wow. This is really...deep. I really like it!!

Thank you very much. (:
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Post by Avé 1/31/2010, 3:40 pm

This is lovely, Sophie, it really is. nod
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Post by xSophiexx16 1/31/2010, 3:40 pm

Ave wrote:This is lovely, Sophie, it really is. nod

Thank you so much, Ave (:
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