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Dead .
Death
When I look around a room
And I see nobody there.
I try to talk to him.
But then I end up nowhere.
So, when I look around myself.
And I see nothing around.
I try to go back to somewhere.
Where I can see or hear a sound.
I stretch my eyes open wide
And I try to make some sense.
But my eyes won’t let me see
As the air quickly turns dense.
I choke on the air
And my mind becomes fogged.
My lungs tear.
And I can’t go on for long.
A cold breeze passes through me
And my skin covers in bumps.
I fall back into black nothingness.
And my heart no longer thumps.
I feel something envelope me
And I try not to feel any dread.
Then something tells me.
That I am now dead.
When I look around a room
And I see nobody there.
I try to talk to him.
But then I end up nowhere.
So, when I look around myself.
And I see nothing around.
I try to go back to somewhere.
Where I can see or hear a sound.
I stretch my eyes open wide
And I try to make some sense.
But my eyes won’t let me see
As the air quickly turns dense.
I choke on the air
And my mind becomes fogged.
My lungs tear.
And I can’t go on for long.
A cold breeze passes through me
And my skin covers in bumps.
I fall back into black nothingness.
And my heart no longer thumps.
I feel something envelope me
And I try not to feel any dread.
Then something tells me.
That I am now dead.
xSophiexx16- Novella Composer
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Re: Dead .
Sophie, this is beautiful. Very... suspensful.
Avé- Best-Selling Author
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Re: Dead .
Thank you both (:
I had much trouble making a poem and this was the only one where the words came to me, you know? So... yeah. x)
I had much trouble making a poem and this was the only one where the words came to me, you know? So... yeah. x)
xSophiexx16- Novella Composer
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