Assez Causé la Douleur

Another one. Enjoy. And look, another french title! :3


So now she sees how it is,
No need to further explain
She understands
Please say no more
Those words have caused enough pain

Now he knows how it feels
To play this cruel love game
A heart so small
A mind so lost
This life has caused enough pain

She hopelessly misses the time
When love was but a flame
Waiting to spark
Waiting to grow
This fire has caused enough pain

He never wants to go back
To being tied down by these chains
Restrained for life
Not free for death
These ropes have caused enough pain

She has vivid memories of when
She had bowed her head in shame
To do so wrong,
But mean so right
These views have caused enough pain

He wonders if there was ever a time
When he wasn't so horribly disdained
For being different,
For being him
This love has caused enough pain

Really good, Ave. x)

Oooh, that's beautiful! Hah, and everything looks better in color. I think you meant "vivid" in the 5th stanza, by the way.

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. ^^ It's got a rhythym and everything, and it's just so epic.

I love this. :3 It's so bittersweet and sad.

Thanks!

And Harmony... yes, I did. Thanks for pointing that out. =D

That's so such an amazing poem, Ave. The way that it's patterned makes it have such a nice flow. I feel so sorry for both of them... It seems like they both had good intentions, but it just turned out wrong.