No Title ... A poem by Pugs!
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No Title ... A poem by Pugs!
Don't glance at the clock
The time doesn't matter
Live in the moment
Don't let life shatter
Throw dreams far away
And quickly follow
If you never look
Your life will be hollow
The best things in life
Are in front of your eyes
If you take the chance
You will soon realize
That life is too short
But it's a great ride
Why are you running?
We've got nothing to hide
Be crazy, be wild,
It won't matter tomorrow
The biggest dreams
You've still got to follow
Don't try to fit in
Aim to stand out
Have fun, laugh lots
It's what life's about
If everything was lost
When life ended today
Would you be proud?
Would you be okay?
Don't regret anything
Be proud of your faults
Imperfections are perfect
Life a beautiful waltz
As you can tell, at the last line I couldn't find a rhyme, so it sounds... weird?
The time doesn't matter
Live in the moment
Don't let life shatter
Throw dreams far away
And quickly follow
If you never look
Your life will be hollow
The best things in life
Are in front of your eyes
If you take the chance
You will soon realize
That life is too short
But it's a great ride
Why are you running?
We've got nothing to hide
Be crazy, be wild,
It won't matter tomorrow
The biggest dreams
You've still got to follow
Don't try to fit in
Aim to stand out
Have fun, laugh lots
It's what life's about
If everything was lost
When life ended today
Would you be proud?
Would you be okay?
Don't regret anything
Be proud of your faults
Imperfections are perfect
Life a beautiful waltz
As you can tell, at the last line I couldn't find a rhyme, so it sounds... weird?
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This wonderful poem sure makes a strong and vivid impression!
Amazing, Pugs! Simply amazing!
Amazing, Pugs! Simply amazing!
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Aw, thanks so much, Crystal.
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The pleasure is all mine, Pugs.
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BTW, I like your siggie pic/text. xD
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Thanks so much, xD
I was honestly feeling nutty when I made it.
I was honestly feeling nutty when I made it.
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Wow, Pugs! This is absolutely amazing! It's very deep...and I really like it.
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Awesome job. I think this stanza is my favorite; it really stood out to me, cus it fits me.
Don't try to fit in
Aim to stand out
Have fun, laugh lots
It's what life's about
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This is really inspiring, Pugs! :3 I love it.
And for the record, I think the last line goes beautifully with the poem. It adds nice imagery.
And for the record, I think the last line goes beautifully with the poem. It adds nice imagery.
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shadowsowner888 wrote:Awesome job. I think this stanza is my favorite; it really stood out to me, cus it fits me.Don't try to fit in
Aim to stand out
Have fun, laugh lots
It's what life's about
Thanks. That one and the one before it were going to be the chorus if I made this into a song, but I decided not to.
Thanks, Keri and Mo!
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Well, good choice in the chorus, then, even if that didn't end up getting used.
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I loved it. It all sounded so fluent and smooth and all. :3
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Thank you, that weird girl. xD
I like your avvie.
I like your avvie.
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Haha, thanks. Bambi pwns.
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Oh, gosh, I love the first line of this. It really made me want to read it all. Nice work, Pugs. =)
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This is such a good poem!!
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Thank you!
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