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No Title ... A poem by Pugs!

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Post by PugsRock 2/13/2010, 7:16 pm

Don't glance at the clock
The time doesn't matter
Live in the moment
Don't let life shatter

Throw dreams far away
And quickly follow
If you never look
Your life will be hollow

The best things in life
Are in front of your eyes
If you take the chance
You will soon realize

That life is too short
But it's a great ride
Why are you running?
We've got nothing to hide

Be crazy, be wild,
It won't matter tomorrow
The biggest dreams
You've still got to follow

Don't try to fit in
Aim to stand out
Have fun, laugh lots
It's what life's about

If everything was lost
When life ended today
Would you be proud?
Would you be okay?

Don't regret anything
Be proud of your faults
Imperfections are perfect
Life a beautiful waltz

As you can tell, at the last line I couldn't find a rhyme, so it sounds... weird?
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Post by Crystal Aura 2/13/2010, 7:47 pm

This wonderful poem sure makes a strong and vivid impression!
Amazing, Pugs! Simply amazing! smitten
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Post by PugsRock 2/13/2010, 7:50 pm

Aw, thanks so much, Crystal. Smile
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Post by Crystal Aura 2/13/2010, 8:09 pm

The pleasure is all mine, Pugs. Smile
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Post by PugsRock 2/13/2010, 8:10 pm

Very Happy

BTW, I like your siggie pic/text. xD
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Post by Crystal Aura 2/13/2010, 8:25 pm

Thanks so much, xD

I was honestly feeling nutty when I made it. hysterical
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Post by LuckyPenny666 2/14/2010, 12:02 am

Wow, Pugs! This is absolutely amazing! It's very deep...and I really like it. Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/14/2010, 9:18 am

Awesome job. cheesy I think this stanza is my favorite; it really stood out to me, cus it fits me. cheesy

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Aim to stand out
Have fun, laugh lots
It's what life's about
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Post by Akeria 2/14/2010, 9:49 am

I really like this, Pugs.
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Post by Komoda 2/14/2010, 10:24 am

This is really inspiring, Pugs! :3 I love it.

And for the record, I think the last line goes beautifully with the poem. It adds nice imagery. Very Happy
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Post by PugsRock 2/14/2010, 12:11 pm

shadowsowner888 wrote:Awesome job. cheesy I think this stanza is my favorite; it really stood out to me, cus it fits me. cheesy

Don't try to fit in
Aim to stand out
Have fun, laugh lots
It's what life's about


Thanks. Very Happy That one and the one before it were going to be the chorus if I made this into a song, but I decided not to.

Thanks, Keri and Mo!
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/14/2010, 1:34 pm

Well, good choice in the chorus, then, even if that didn't end up getting used. Very Happy
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/15/2010, 12:11 pm

I loved it. Very Happy It all sounded so fluent and smooth and all. :3
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Post by PugsRock 2/15/2010, 12:13 pm

Thank you, that weird girl. xD

I like your avvie. Smile
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/15/2010, 1:02 pm

Haha, thanks. Bambi pwns. Very Happy
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Post by Avé 2/15/2010, 2:19 pm

Oh, gosh, I love the first line of this. It really made me want to read it all. Nice work, Pugs. =)
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Post by Hahaha818 2/19/2010, 6:22 pm

This is such a good poem!!
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Post by PugsRock 2/19/2010, 6:23 pm

Thank you! Smile
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