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Post by Avé 2/17/2010, 8:16 am

So I lied. xP But it's just this poem, I promise. I won't post anymore for a while. I'm done clogging up the section. -cheers-

Master, please don't hurt me
Those crazy thoughts are gone
Yes, I thought they cared -
I know where I went wrong

Master, please don't kill me
Not that I want to live
It's not much of a life,
And it's all I have to give

Master, please don't lock me
In this cage I know so well
I said I'll keep your secrets
And I promimse I won't tell

Master, do you hate me?
It really feels that way
Let me tell you that I love you -
Now that's all I have to say
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/17/2010, 9:11 am

Yay! You're done! I'm just kidding. I'm gonna miss your poems while you are gone not clogging up the section. Sad

This is really good. It's all fluent and rhythmey and perfect. Very Happy
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Post by rattyjol 2/17/2010, 11:46 am

Awesome. Very Happy
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Post by Puckspaw 2/17/2010, 3:17 pm

Awesome job Very Happy
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Post by Avé 2/17/2010, 5:05 pm

Danke.

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Post by shadowsowner888 2/17/2010, 6:38 pm

Nuuu, don't stop clogging up the section! xD I love your poems!

Anyway, I like it. x3 This is so haunting.
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Post by Avé 2/17/2010, 7:05 pm

Meh. xD

Thanks, Shad- er, Kumori Sundavhor. Am I loved now? Ha. =D
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Post by Imagine 2/17/2010, 7:07 pm

This is really epic. =)
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Post by Avé 2/17/2010, 7:08 pm

Oh, yay! Very Happy Thanks, Alice.


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Post by Imagine 2/17/2010, 7:09 pm

You're welcomez. =3
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/17/2010, 7:28 pm

Ave wrote:Meh. xD

Thanks, Shad- er, Kumori Sundavhor. Am I loved now? Ha. =D

*squee* ILOVEYOU! Very Happy

Swelcome. grin And thank you for making my little dream come true. xD
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Post by Avé 2/17/2010, 7:32 pm

*sings* I feel the lovvvveeeeee, I feeeeeel the lovvveeeeee.
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