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Post by Puckspaw 2/20/2010, 1:26 am

I wasn't really sure whether to post this under poems or not, so sorry if it doesn't belong here. :/



Will gossipers never cease to gossip?
Or alcoholics drink?
Will the bully always hurt?

As sure as the moon shines at night
Addict's will continue in their habits
Unless he desires not to do so

Does the sinner admit to his sin?
Or does he continue in his wrong doing?
Why does man never confess to his sin?

And so I urge you, do not be like the gossiper
Who whispers lies into another's ear
Or the alcoholic who never ceases to accept
Another drink
Do not be like the bully who hurts and steals
without good reason

But most of all I urge you to confess
Your sins and to admit to wrong doing
For this, above all else, is most important


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Post by shadowsowner888 2/20/2010, 9:05 am

Seems like a poem to me! :1

Maybe it could be called Addictive Sins?
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Post by Akeria 2/21/2010, 7:00 pm

Ooooh. *Likes*

I like Shadow's idea too.
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Post by Puckspaw 2/21/2010, 11:25 pm

Someone also suggested Most Important
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/22/2010, 8:34 pm

I think Most Important is good, too. cheesy
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