Lost You...
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Lost You...
by Malicious Nightmares 7/6/2009, 5:37 pm
This is a poem I made,since my grandma died a few days ago. 
Maturity:The word die
Fantasy:Doubght it.
I lost you,
I miss you,
I wish I could be with you.
Did you hear me scream?
Was it just a dream?
The night,
The fright,
This was no lie,
I gaze upon the sky.
I fell the tears,
Close to my ears,
I fell the pain,
Thus I stand in the rain.
I thought it was a lie,
Did you truly die?
I saw you,
I learnt it was true.
So you did die,
And I truly did cry.
Good bye,
See you some day,
In heaven I say.
~In memory to my loving grandma.(On my dad's side.)
Maturity:The word die
Fantasy:Doubght it.
I lost you,
I miss you,
I wish I could be with you.
Did you hear me scream?
Was it just a dream?
The night,
The fright,
This was no lie,
I gaze upon the sky.
I fell the tears,
Close to my ears,
I fell the pain,
Thus I stand in the rain.
I thought it was a lie,
Did you truly die?
I saw you,
I learnt it was true.
So you did die,
And I truly did cry.
Good bye,
See you some day,
In heaven I say.
~In memory to my loving grandma.(On my dad's side.)
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Re: Lost You...
by Malicious Nightmares 7/6/2009, 6:09 pm
Thanks for posting Dream!
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Re: Lost You...
by shadowsowner888 7/9/2009, 9:11 am
Aww, sorry about your grandma! That's a really good poem. Emotion makes us write, doesn't it?
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Re: Lost You...
by Malicious Nightmares 7/9/2009, 10:36 am
Yepp.
I had to stare at her body the day she died.So...uh...we were there about 2 hours or 1?So starring made me think of a poem.
I had to stare at her body the day she died.So...uh...we were there about 2 hours or 1?So starring made me think of a poem.
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Re: Lost You...
by shadowsowner888 7/9/2009, 11:12 am
Yeah . . . I can see what you mean, like how you'd get a poem from that. XP Knowing me, I would too. (Specially if it was my little Angel that died. ) Again, I'm really sorry.
) Again, I'm really sorry.
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Re: Lost You...
by Malicious Nightmares 7/9/2009, 12:35 pm
Thanks Shadow....(Whoops,I wrote Shadows before.)
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Re: Lost You...
by IDmangapasta 7/10/2009, 10:40 am
oh, i'm sorry about your grandma! the poems good tho!
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