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What I Used To Be

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Post by Malicious Nightmares 2/28/2010, 12:52 pm

What I Used To Be

I know one day I may die,
Without surpressing a single sigh.
My coldhearted scarlet blood,
Will run down and stain the mud.
An unwanted sight,
After a long and brutal fight.
All this was fate,
All this was hate.
As I look down from heaven,
I see my own reflection.
All I may see,
Is what I used to be.
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Post by FOREIGN?! 2/28/2010, 1:11 pm

Amazing, Mia! I love the last four lines especially. Very Happy
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 2/28/2010, 1:29 pm

Yeah, same here. Four last lines were my fave, too.

Thanks!
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Post by shadowsowner888 2/28/2010, 1:32 pm

Epic, Mia. Very Happy
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 2/28/2010, 1:32 pm

Thank you!
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Post by Akeria 2/28/2010, 2:25 pm

This is so good! You're such a good poet, CBI. Smile
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 2/28/2010, 2:36 pm

Zomg! Tanku! :33
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