My World Of Blue
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My World Of Blue
Everywhere I look
There's blue all around
I like this world
But I feel I might drown
I go to the top
I can finally breathe
There's no more blue
I can clearly see
I liked it better
When all was blue
I go back to that place
There's so much I can do
Again I surface
Just for a second
I need to catch my breath
But the blue seems to beckon
Back to the blue
Back to my little world
Where everything that's there
Just seems to swirl
I wish I could stay
For a little while longer
But I can't be in the blue
Unless my lungs become stronger
I get out reluctantly
Trying not to argue
'Cause someday I'll go back
To my world of blue
Can you guess what this poem is about?
There's blue all around
I like this world
But I feel I might drown
I go to the top
I can finally breathe
There's no more blue
I can clearly see
I liked it better
When all was blue
I go back to that place
There's so much I can do
Again I surface
Just for a second
I need to catch my breath
But the blue seems to beckon
Back to the blue
Back to my little world
Where everything that's there
Just seems to swirl
I wish I could stay
For a little while longer
But I can't be in the blue
Unless my lungs become stronger
I get out reluctantly
Trying not to argue
'Cause someday I'll go back
To my world of blue
Can you guess what this poem is about?
Last edited by Hahaha818 on 3/15/2010, 6:25 pm; edited 1 time in total
Hahaha818- Short Story Writer
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Re: My World Of Blue
That's wonderful. :3 I think it's so pretty, especially because it's about the color blue, which I love.
Re: My World Of Blue
Epicccc! A poem about blue-ish-ness? Revolutionary! xD
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Re: My World Of Blue
Great Job Go blue!!
CookieMonster- Inspired Novice
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Re: My World Of Blue
Ooo, I felt like I was on vacation when I read it, don't know why, it's just beautiful! Go blue!!!
Novastare- Novella Composer
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Re: My World Of Blue
Thanks, Nova!!!
Hahaha818- Short Story Writer
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Re: My World Of Blue
No problem, Great poem!
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