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is it dark if you've never seen light
is it bad if you've never heard good
is it pain if you've never felt pleasure
is it fresh you've never smelt rancid
is it bitter if you've never tasted sweet

these questions i ask myself at the bottom of a pit. no light to guide me on but my imaginations. swimming through a murky ocean people, and possessions, and junk with no hope of surfacing. at every glimmer of a snake i see fresh, beautiful, salty air. only to be lead to murkier depths. now i see a glimmer, never have i been this close, yet. is it another snake wishing to kill me? or a tunnel to paradise. i grab hold of this latest hope and take a ride.

Wow... I love it.

Wonderful!

With a bit of capitalization, it'll be perfect!
[[Just a suggestion. ]]

If you want, I could do the capitalization. Then you could paste it on. :3
[[Ha ha. I've got nothing better to do, so.. ]]

Woah. Very deep. :O