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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/19/2010, 10:03 am

Ask me how I've been,
See how much I sin.

Taking a knife to the heart?
Think you're really that smart?

Will you be paying?
Or dying?

The choice belongs to you,
Just choose what to do.

Because while time passes,
I'll be burning you to ashes.

Next time you see me,
Guess where we'll be.

No doubt we won't be well,
When we meet in *heck*.


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Post by shadowsowner888 3/20/2010, 9:48 am

Hehe, this is so insane, like, "Oh, greetings, my friend. I'm going to kill you." xD Awesome job.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/20/2010, 10:13 am

Thanks. XD
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 3/20/2010, 7:22 pm

Lol, yeah Shadow, it seems very off; but it works x3 The second couplet is by far my favorite; it's taunting the reader, lol. I lurves it ^^
And for a title, I think Shad had the idea; Hello, How Are You? It's such a normal title, and then the poem is so twisted. I dunno, maybe I find things amusing that I shouldn't. x3
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/20/2010, 7:25 pm

Thank you! :3

Wonderful idea. Twisted Evil *edits title*
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/21/2010, 9:19 am

Yay! xD I inspired the title! That's such a beautiful title, though, seriously. :O For the poem. It makes everything that much more twisted. xD
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/21/2010, 9:21 am

I felt random, and partially 'evil' I guess you could say... XD So I wrote this. nod
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Post by Avé 3/21/2010, 11:56 am

Ahh, another amazing poem by Mia. <3
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/21/2010, 12:16 pm

Thanks, Ave!
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Post by Crystal Aura 3/21/2010, 12:18 pm

Excellent. smitten
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/22/2010, 9:00 am

Absolutely lovely, in a creepy way. xD Awesome poem, Mia! Very Happy
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/22/2010, 3:45 pm

Thanks, both of ya!
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Post by Erinbeth 3/23/2010, 11:23 am

Ooooh I love this!
It has a reflection like. "I love you *Stabs* " lol my kinda poem!

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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/23/2010, 3:38 pm

Lol. Thanks! :3
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Post by Shilah 3/27/2010, 9:44 am

This is beautiful. When I read it, I kept thinking that maybe it's the Grim Reaper or someone important that's saying those lines. And in saying those lines, they're confronting someone on whether or not suicide is the right choice. However, either one they choose still leads them to the same death sentence.

Once again, my angst-ridden mind is speaking. xD

I love it.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/27/2010, 2:59 pm

Thank you, very much! smiley
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