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Post by xSophiexx16 3/20/2010, 2:39 am

Sad Song

I’m starting to think that everybody hates me.
They say hello, but the conversation ends abruptly.
I just don’t get why suddenly I’m not liked.
Are you guys serious or am I getting siked?

Oh, can you hear me calling-
Asking for some aid?
It’s all so horrendous-
I can’t be re-made.

I’ve broken down; I don’t know what to do.
I can’t live without each and every one of you.
I need some love, or just somebody who likes…

Me just for me –
Well, can’t you see?

Oh, can you hear me calling-
Asking for some aid?
It’s all so horrendous-
I can’t be re-made.

I’ve broken down; I don’t know what to do.
I can’t live without each and every one of you.

I’m calling out, I’m crying for somebody near.
It wouldn’t make a difference if I were to disappear.
I’d rather be invisible than live with hate.
I guess I’ll sit right here and wait for love to abate.

I wish that I could live without any love.
But now I know it’s what the world needs to be made of.
We’ve only got a little stored up in ourselves.
But if we spread it – it doubles and stacks up on shelves.

Oh, how I wish you heard me calling.
I’m sticking in, waiting to be seen.
I’ll keep on calling till somebody hears me.
Live or die- I think I’m caught in between.

*I sang this while I wrote it, so it may not have a good beat at all. I held words and stuff to make things longer, blah blah.*
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/20/2010, 10:07 am

I like it, Soph. ^^
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Post by xSophiexx16 3/20/2010, 11:23 pm

Thanks (:
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/22/2010, 11:19 am

I love it, Sophie! I think the rhythm and flow are perfect. Very Happy
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Post by xSophiexx16 3/22/2010, 3:42 pm

Thank you very much! (:
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