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Post by SaddleClub 7/7/2010, 11:58 pm

((Oh Adam xD))

Peter: I tried swinging my legs up, but that made the branch bounce. "I can't!"
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Post by rattyjol 7/8/2010, 12:02 am

Adam: "Scaredy cat."
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Post by SaddleClub 7/8/2010, 12:11 am

Peter: I tried swinging again. There was no branch below me I could jump on to. Only the one I was holding. I felt tears fill my eyes as I realized I was stuck. "Gonna fall!"
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Post by rattyjol 7/8/2010, 12:16 am

Adam: "No you're not," I scoffed. "Just don't let go."
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Post by SaddleClub 7/8/2010, 12:32 am

Peter: I held tightly, but my hands were starting to hurt. I looked down again. The ground was really, really far away. I heard a small snapping noise and saw the branch beginning to break. I whimpered. "Adam! Branch!"
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Post by rattyjol 7/8/2010, 12:43 am

Adam: "What about it?" I asked, not noticing the crack.
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Post by SaddleClub 7/8/2010, 1:19 pm

Peter: "It broke! Help!" I was scared, and I could feel myself begin to cry.
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Post by rattyjol 7/8/2010, 10:15 pm

Adam: "No it didn't, silly. It's still attached, see?" I pointed at the place where the branch attached to the trunk.
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Post by SaddleClub 7/9/2010, 1:37 am

Peter: I heard the branch snap a little more and gripped tighter. "Help me!"
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Post by rattyjol 7/9/2010, 1:46 am

Adam: "All right," I grumbled, starting to slowly climb back down towards him. "Scaredy cat."
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Post by SaddleClub 7/9/2010, 1:55 am

Peter: I hoped Adam would hurry up. I didn't want to fall. I looked down again. I'd be a pancake if I fell from here.
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Post by rattyjol 7/9/2010, 7:31 am

(...Is he going to fall?)

Adam: I climbed onto the branch, not realizing that it was breaking.
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Post by SaddleClub 7/9/2010, 12:05 pm

((I was gonna have him fall onto a lower branch, then slip off that one, if that's ok with you))

Peter: "Look out!"
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Post by rattyjol 7/9/2010, 3:43 pm

Adam: "For what?"
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Post by SaddleClub 7/9/2010, 4:01 pm

Peter: "Branch!" The branch suddenly snapped, causing me to fall. I fell for a while, but quickly grabbed another one, scraping my arms and legs in the process. I looked down again. I was closer to the ground, but still kind of high up. Looking down made me dizzy and I lost grip on the branch. I fell to the ground then everything went dark.....

((*cue dramatic music*

I had him fall to a lower branch first so he wouldn't die nod))
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Post by rattyjol 7/9/2010, 11:43 pm

Adam: "Peter!" I screamed, scrambling down towards the ground.
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Post by SaddleClub 7/10/2010, 1:21 am

((.....umm.....Peter's like knocked out.....cue Allison coming outside xD))

Allison: I heard screaming and ran outside. "What's going on?"
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Post by rattyjol 7/10/2010, 12:33 pm

Adam: "Peter fell!" I exclaimed, pointing.
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Post by SaddleClub 7/10/2010, 5:07 pm

Allison: All that ran through my mind was panic. "How did he fall? From where?" I shouted as I ran over to the scene of the accident. I got on my knees and gently shook Peter's small shoulders. "Peter! Peter! Can you hear me?" I got no response so I turned back to Adam. "How long ago did he fall? Where did he fall from?"
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Post by rattyjol 7/11/2010, 12:05 am

Adam: "Just now. He fell from there-" I pointed at the first branch "-to there-" I pointed to the second "-to there." I pointed to where he was now.
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Post by SaddleClub 7/11/2010, 1:49 pm

Allison: My eyes widened. He had had a decently long fall. I took out my cell phone and quickly dialed 911. When I got an answer, I explained the situation. The person on the other end said, "Ok, we'll send an ambulance over right away." Next, I had to call Peter's parents. Guilt filled me as I dialed the number. When his mom answered, I had to explain the situation. The ambulance had arrived by the time I finished, and I apologized to her about a million times as I led Adam into the truck. We drove away, sirens wailing. I never took my tear filled eyes off Peter.

((.....too much?))
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Post by rattyjol 7/11/2010, 7:01 pm

Adam: I wasn't even excited about riding in the ambulance. I stuck close to Allison, my eyes on the ground.
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Post by SaddleClub 7/19/2010, 4:35 pm

Allison: Tears gently started streaming down my face as the ambulance sped down the road. I watched them begin to hook Peter up to IVs until I couldn't take it anymore. I put my hands on Adam's shoulders and closed my eyes, wishing this was all just a dream.
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Post by rattyjol 7/21/2010, 12:24 am

Adam: I shrunk close to her, shivering. What if he died?
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Post by SaddleClub 7/21/2010, 1:05 pm

((How far should we have this go on for? Just wondering))

Allison: Please be ok, please be ok....I silently prayed over and over; my mind sounded like a track on repeat. If anything happened.....no, I couldn't think that. But anything that happened to him would all be my fault. I should have watched him and Adam more. I should have gone outside with them. I should have told them to watch TV. There's so much I should have and could have done, but I didn't.....Please be ok, please be ok, please be ok....
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