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Post by Puckspaw 3/26/2010, 5:02 pm

You were kind and cunning
Your smile so sweet
Your eyes dark and stunning
You were mine to keep

But what I did not see
Was that it was all lies
You were deceitful and clever
All hidden behind those dark eyes

I didn't know just how clever
You could possibly be
You were a pretender, a fake
All you did was lie to me

You had all I thought I wanted
You made me a believer
I trusted you with everything
But you were only a deceiver
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/26/2010, 6:14 pm

If Fang was a liar, that would be the perfect poem for his book. xD
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Post by Puckspaw 3/26/2010, 6:17 pm

It always comes back to Maximum Ride. Lol. But, yeah, I didn't realize it when I was writing it, but it does kinda describe Fang.


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Post by Hahaha818 3/27/2010, 4:59 pm

Is this about someone you know? If so, do I know them?

P.S. great job!!!
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Post by Puckspaw 3/28/2010, 8:18 pm

Thanks! Very Happy
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