The Deceiver
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The Deceiver
You were kind and cunning
Your smile so sweet
Your eyes dark and stunning
You were mine to keep
But what I did not see
Was that it was all lies
You were deceitful and clever
All hidden behind those dark eyes
I didn't know just how clever
You could possibly be
You were a pretender, a fake
All you did was lie to me
You had all I thought I wanted
You made me a believer
I trusted you with everything
But you were only a deceiver
Your smile so sweet
Your eyes dark and stunning
You were mine to keep
But what I did not see
Was that it was all lies
You were deceitful and clever
All hidden behind those dark eyes
I didn't know just how clever
You could possibly be
You were a pretender, a fake
All you did was lie to me
You had all I thought I wanted
You made me a believer
I trusted you with everything
But you were only a deceiver
Puckspaw- Novelette Scribe
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Age : 31
Re: The Deceiver
It always comes back to Maximum Ride. Lol. But, yeah, I didn't realize it when I was writing it, but it does kinda describe Fang.
Last edited by Puckspaw on 4/28/2010, 4:59 pm; edited 1 time in total
Puckspaw- Novelette Scribe
- Posts : 616
Join date : 2010-02-08
Age : 31
Re: The Deceiver
Is this about someone you know? If so, do I know them?
P.S. great job!!!
P.S. great job!!!
Hahaha818- Short Story Writer
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