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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/28/2010, 9:23 pm

Maturity: High-grahpic violence and romance, but no pregnacies.
Fantasy: Uhm... flying children.

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Centuries of thoughts.
Decades of research.
Years of experimentation.
One company.
With many on their side. Some not completly human.
Amanda. Mea. Max. Fang. Iggy. Nudge. Gazzy. Angel.
The Experiment.
The Flock.
The Survivors.
The keys to survival.
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~*~RESERVED~*~
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~*~RESERVED~*~
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~*~RESERVED~*~
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Post by Jinx 3/29/2010, 6:18 am

(Ooooooh, Pretty...
Should I post?)
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/29/2010, 5:36 pm

[I'll start... when I finish my homework. Wink]
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Post by Jinx 3/29/2010, 5:38 pm

(Darnit! You just reminded me of mine. I got lotsa homework xP)
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/29/2010, 8:07 pm

I was ten years old, trapped in a dog crate, leaning against the bars of my cage. "Fang? He's here." I motioned to the whitecoat walking towards us, and, automatically, I tensed, my hands clenching into fists, my legs gathering under me so I could spring. I saw Max doing the same thing in the dog crate next to me, and Iggy was staring at me, wide-eyed. Well, as wide-eyed as a blind mutant can be. "Tense." I whispered so quietly the whitecoat couldn't hear me. Angel was only two, but she was in the same position I was as the doctor approached.
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Post by Jinx 3/30/2010, 6:27 am

Fang was doing the same, shooting a quick look at Amanda and Max before concentrating again on the goal ahead.
Nudge's eyes flickered all over, and she almost forgot what she was doing, a frenetic nervousness overpowering her.
Gazzy, only four, crouched, staring determinately out at the sparklingly clean, antispetic smelling room outside, pretending to be brave so that Angel wouldn't get nervous.

Several rooms away, however Test Subject 46 was being taken to the operating room, where a pair of black wings waited for her. She, like Gazzy was pretending to be brave, but that was hard to do when strapped to a stretcher. She shook uncontrollably until they were in the room and she was injected with some kind of anesthetic.


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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/30/2010, 5:08 pm

[Gazzy's not two.... he's four right now. DNA~ Definetly Not Anticipated Icon_wink]

I glared quietly as he knelt down to my level. "Amanda." He whispered, so quietly that only I could hear him, and maybe Fang, if he listened hard enough. "Be on your guard. We're going to get you all out of here. Be prepared." He whispered ever so silently. "But... wait.... how..." I began, but he shook his head. "Just be prepared." I nodded. As he left, I nodded in Fang's direction. "You guys can relax." I let my hands fall as I sat down on the cold floor. This would be... interesting.
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Post by Jinx 3/30/2010, 5:17 pm

(Nyar. Sorry.)

Fang listened very intently to the conversation, determined to catch each word."Amanda." He heard him whisper, almost silently "Be on your guard. We're going to get you all out of here. Be prepared." He dipped his head, just slightly to let them know he got the message.
Then he went to say "You guys can relax."
He let himself, but was still tense, worried about the flock-and Amanda.
Both Gazzy and Nudge frowned, but did as they were told.


Test subject 46 rested on the slab, the surgery just beginning. It was supposed to take forty-five minutes, and this monumental occasion was distracting a large amount of the scientists from their usual routine.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/30/2010, 6:06 pm

[It's fine. Smile]

I folded my arms in front of my chest, leaning towards Fang. "Wonder what that was all about." I muttered silently, sinking slowly to the floor. "I highly doubt he's serious." Angel looked at me, a pleading look in her blue eyes, and I smiled encouragingly. She giggled to herself, shutting her eyes and going back to a nap. She was lucky to be bale to escape. I had to be on my guard every second of every day, watching, waiting, watching, waiting... it got boring after a while. But it wasn't like I could stop.
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"Wonder what that was all about." She muttered "I highly doubt he's serious." Fang stared out at the wall for a few moment, then looked up at Amanda, shrugging slightly.
Nudge shivered in anticipation, her motormouth starting up again as she started chatting (in a loud stage whisper) with Gazzie and Angel
"Whadd'ya think life will be like out there? I bet it will be awesome, I bet they've got all kinds of delicious food and new clothes for us and we won't have to go through all the stuff they make us do here..."

"Blahblabla...Blah!" was pretty much all Gazzy heard, as he napped nonchalantly in his crate.

Once the wings where in completely, the long part of the operation started-the electric shocks to stimulate the unused nerves and muscles in the wing. This would help them connect to the brain, which with the new method they developed should only take a week instead of months as it had been predicted before.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/30/2010, 8:38 pm

I sighed, making a pillow out of my arms and lying my head on it, curled into a ball. "You're on watch." I alerted him, closing one eye and watching everyone. Hopefully, whatever the whitecoat was talking about would happen. I needed to get out.
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Post by Jinx 3/31/2010, 12:48 pm

"You're on watch." He heard her say
"Alright." He said, almost silent.


The patient needed to be quickly re-injected, as the electric shock had counteracted the drug. The scientists who where in charge monitoring her life signs were getting nervous-because the extra sedative was slowing Subject 46's heart rate and brain function down to an unsafe level. They signaled the actual operators to hurry up, which meant the shocks would have to be completed 3 minutes faster than anticipated.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 3/31/2010, 5:24 pm

[Now what? I got WB. xD]
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Post by Jinx 4/1/2010, 6:45 am

(Um...Why don't we just start the escape?)
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 4/1/2010, 5:25 pm

[Sure. You start or me?]
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Post by Jinx 4/3/2010, 5:55 am

(Er, you.)
((Sorry I vanished, I was really sick))
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 4/3/2010, 8:42 pm

"Amanda." Someone whispered from my cage. "What do you want?" I hissed, and then realized it was the whitecoat that was getting us out. "Are you ready?" He asked. I nodded quietly. "Flock? We're breaking out."
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Post by Jinx 4/5/2010, 1:47 pm

Nudge bit down hard on her lip.
"Ok!" She stage-whispered, giggling a bit crazily.

Fang watched the stranger intentely, getting up from 'resting' quickly.
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He unlocked my cage, and I crawled out, unlocking Fang's cage and holding my hand out with a cheesy smile. "Need some help?" I teased.
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Post by Jinx 4/8/2010, 10:07 pm

"No" He muttered, getting out.

"What about me" Nudge added, impatiently.
"And me!"


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"I'm coming." I laughed, pulling them both out. "Come on."
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Post by Jinx 4/9/2010, 5:28 pm

"Thank you" Nudge whispered, with a giggle. She liked this whitecoat.
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