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Post by Puckspaw 3/28/2010, 10:00 pm

Sorry if it's a little hard to follow :/


I watched as the smile
Fell from your face
It was there and then gone
Without a trace

I didn't mean to
It really wasn't planned
It was so unexpected
It's hard to understand

I hate to know
That's it's all my fault
The plans that you had
Quickly came to a halt

I watched as the officer
Told you what happened
The horrifying tragedy
You couldn't have imagined

I thought that the man
Just wanted to play
So I took his hand
It was my last day

I wish it hadn't happened
The way that it did
I wish I could change it
I was only a kid

The person who did this
Deserves to pay
Deserves the worst
For I died on that day

I stand from a distance
And watch as you cry
"I love you, Mommy."
It is my final goodbye
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Post by Avé 3/28/2010, 10:55 pm

This is wonderful. Very Happy
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/29/2010, 9:07 am

Amazing poem, Puck. Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/29/2010, 4:25 pm

It is a ghostie speaking! :O *gasp*

:3 Great job.
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Post by Puckspaw 3/30/2010, 4:56 pm

Thanks everyone! Very Happy

And yes, Shadow, it is a ghostie speaking. nod Lol
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