Broken Hearth.

Hello!

I try to translate a poetry that a writte some time ago. Tell me if is there something that you don´t understand

My hearth is crying,
shouting for help.
But nobody can lisen it,
and nobody care.

I am in the line.
I will lost the sanity.
Without your love
I am nothing

I am like a ship
sailing without course.
There is not costs in sight,
there is not a captain.
I am a ship adrift.

The stars in my sky fall,
but this is not important to me.
The only important thing is if
you know all that you lost in me.

You let me here,
so scared, so lost.
You let me free,
without a way, without your love.

Now I can´t go with the wind,
because my ship is sinking
without his sail.
Like I walk without my soul.

Now the night are more cool,
watching the stars and the moon
that you give me.
Imposibles presents.

Now all my strenght is gone,
and my way is broken
in two pieces.
Like my broken hearth,
the other piece,
is that you have

This is really good! <3

(By the way... is there anything I can call you other than ckony?)

Ave wrote:This is really good! <3

(By the way... is there anything I can call you other than ckony?)

In chile we call cony at constanzas, connie can writte in diferrents ways.

But my others nick are connie, coté, gloria (my first name), tanzie, co, cons, tanza, coná, coty, constance and i dont remmember others nicks in this moment

Great poem, Gloria!

Woah, Connie, that's amazing. I think I understand the whole thing! You're really good at poetry.

Thanks!

Shadowsower in the spanish world I am a poetry and fics writter so "famous" I have too much histories