Secret Waterfall Temp.

(haha it's about Jake i know it)

Hearts wrote:(and I wanna see it)

[[Haha. You'll be soo annoyed me just reading 'em. People change too much. xD]]

On Page 4,
((Jake is my character so she'd need my permission... And I'm pretty sure she wouldn't want Rosie's blood in her person LOL xD And Jake aint a cheater.))

I was in a stream with a roaring waterfall beside me. Jake was freaking out that Adam had disappeared. Rosie just left for work... Jake knew he had made a mistake, and he came up to me, knowing I'd leave soon to. "Jimmy... I met the girl that was perfect for me on the island, but I gave it up. Don't make the same mistake..." he said to me as I disappeared. What was he talking about? I quickly jumped onto land. Ah Ha! I hadn't fallen! I looked down and other people were in the water. "Oh, what the heck," I said, Diving down. I came up and saw Adam. "Hey man!" I said, noticing two other people. "Is this the place Jake always talks about?" I asked, and he nodded his head. "So... We get effects?" I asked, really eager. I loved a good adventure.

((See Shadow? Atleast Jake is unhappy with Rosie ))

Me:

(( YAY!! Uhh huh!! xD ))

(( Wait.. who was the perfect girl? ))

You:

((Emma ))

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And on Page 2....

((Awwww ))

((Sure! ))

I was eating breakfast with my parents, Jake Parker and rosie Coacher. Well, Rosie Parker now I guess. They told me to call them by their first names, they didn't like Mommy and Daddy. Well, Rosie said that, not Jake. Jake seemed unhappy... I wanted to ask him what was wrong but I didn't. I couldn't. Last night he said a name that I was only slightly familiar with. Emma. Who was Emma? He had a drawing of her named Emma. She was very pretty, I wondered if Rosie knew about her. Maybe she was my Aunt. I didn't know, I changed into my football jersey, and walked out of my house. Wait... This wasn't my house. Where was I? I heard a scream, I looked down. I was on the edge of the water, and another girl had just fallen down. "Hello?" I called out, feeling the water leave my feet. I looked down, I was free falling down it. I landed in a cannon ball shape, and there was a huge splash. The water stung my skin, and I broke through the surface of the water, looking at the other girl. "Hey..." I said, a bit puzzled. "I've heard about this place... But... Why are we here?" I asked her, moving my blonde hair from my eyes.

((LOL She's right xD All of my character's hooked up, lol, pretty sad xD))
((Adam has a twin... I might make him Jacob(Jake Jr. xD) or what name goes with Adam? Nick?))


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I so waste my time. xDDD

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Hearts wrote:(haha it's about Jake i know it)

[[Yep. It is. xDD You know me way too good. I waste my time too often. lol]]

[[I wish it would like on Ghost of Girlfriends Past, and she sees the painting/drawing. xD]]

[Lol. On the form I saw the Jack's name was originaly Jimmy. XD]

[[I saw that too. xD I love reading about the old times. I have problems. xDD]]

(I think I've improved and gotten worse in my writing)

Hearts wrote:(I think I've improved and gotten worse in my writing)

[[-pushes playfully in shoulder- Yeah right. xD I think I've gotten worse on so many levels, ever since I was banned I hadn't been writing. It really hurt my writing. Dx]]

[How did you get worse?]\

(How did you get banned Leah? And from what site?)

(Should I make a new thread?)

[quote="[mandy]

(omg my friend ex bf is Jimmy lol and rp Amanda and Matt l?

randomgirl wrote:[How did you get worse?]\

[[Detail [which hurt alot] pretty much.]]

(Landy its not working again...)

Hearts wrote:(omg my friend ex bf is Jimmy lol and rp Amanda and Matt l?

[[Sure. I'm gonna enjoy this part. xD]]

(The quoting...)
(Well it did with Cassie's but not me...)

[mandy]</3 wrote:(Landy its not working again...)

[[IDK why, but it works for everyone else, but not u. Dx]]

[[Make a new thread, definatly.]]

[[And BI. IDK why really...]]

(Well like I've stopped using more creAtove words and finding new words and stuff. Like my writing used to be compared to a 21 year olds when I was 11 and now it's more of a 14 year olds

Hearts wrote:(Well like I've stopped using more creAtove words and finding new words and stuff. Like my writing used to be compared to a 21 year olds when I was 11 and now it's more of a 14 year olds

[[IDK what mine's compared to. What you all think? I know it's gonna be pretty low. xD]]

leah_hope92 wrote:

randomgirl wrote:[How did you get worse?]\

[[Detail [which hurt alot] pretty much.]]

[I asked Emffers. And how does detail make it worse??]

Diving through the waterfall I got up, shaking my soaking mop of curly brown hair, hardly a shade darker than My tan skin. Immediately I saw Amanda; she looked amazing. The only difference from me wad that I was shirtless, tan, had a defined muscle chest, and a six pack. "Hey beautiful," I smiled Jogging up to her.

(idk I'm a bad judge )

(anyone rp?)
(Should I make a new thread?)
(New generation..!)

[Kristen and JAck still have to do their plot. xD]