Re: ☼ S.S. Hook Up ~ The Couples Cruise ☼ {ENGLAND!}

by **sweettee11** 4/26/2010, 9:24 pm

Name- Bridget 'Bee' Giordano
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Age - 14
Gender - Female
Description - She has golden blonde hair with long bangs. Her bangs are a neon blue color. Her eyes are green, and the pupil is outlined in black. Her eyes have black and gold flecks.
Personality- She is out-going and usually does whatever she wants. She is rude and occasionally nice. Considered a rebel.

Likes/Pros - She loves animals, bright colors, and reading. Tech wizz.
Dislikes/Cons - She can't stand the dark, it makes her get the feeling like someone is watching her.
Reason for Being On Ship- Her parents think it will make her listen.
History- She comes from a rich family in San Diego. Her parents think she is too much of her own person.

by <3--[Emily]--<< 4/26/2010, 10:11 pm

[[approved (:]]

by Pandaz ♪ 4/26/2010, 10:16 pm

(Anyone RP? Anything for me?)

by Doggiewriter23 4/27/2010, 2:27 pm

Izzy got back on the boat after a long day of visiting France. She walked around the front. She wished she had a friend to go to the bar with.

((Anyone want to RP? You can reply to that post!))

by [xo] ashley 4/27/2010, 4:41 pm

Writersgurl23 wrote:Izzy got back on the boat after a long day of visiting France. She walked around the front. She wished she had a friend to go to the bar with.

((Anyone want to RP? You can reply to that post!))

[i will! i already made my guy & got approved. ;D]

trey walked around the boat, looking for the bar. he was kind of thirsty after spending his day in france.

by <3--[Emily]--<< 4/27/2010, 4:46 pm

[[you have to make an introduction, ashley. Like saying how he got on the boat and to his room and stuff.]]

by Doggiewriter23 4/27/2010, 4:49 pm

Izzy walked inside the bar. She asked for a glass of beer. She swallowed it all in two gulps.

by [xo] ashley 4/27/2010, 4:57 pm

<3--[Emily]--<< wrote:[[you have to make an introduction, ashley. Like saying how he got on the boat and to his room and stuff.]]

[ohhhhhhhhhhhh, okay. sorry! ;/
i'll do that now.]

all trey wanted was love. he really wanted a girl that cared about him for who he was, not just his looks. so, his parents sent him off to ss hookup. trey arrived at ss hookup when everybody was in france. he didn't know where his room was, so he checked the front desk & got the key. trey then headed up to his room & put his bags down.

[is that okay? (:]

by Doggiewriter23 4/27/2010, 4:58 pm

((That's how I did it but mine was shorter))

by <3--[Emily]--<< 4/27/2010, 5:01 pm

[Yep that's fine! (:]

by Doggiewriter23 4/27/2010, 5:02 pm

[xo] ashley wrote:
Writersgurl23 wrote:Izzy got back on the boat after a long day of visiting France. She walked around the front. She wished she had a friend to go to the bar with.

((Anyone want to RP? You can reply to that post!))

[i will! i already made my guy & got approved. ;D]

trey walked around the boat, looking for the bar. he was kind of thirsty after spending his day in france.

Izzy spotted a cute guy. She ran up to him and grabbed his hand. "Looking for the bar? Follow me!"
She pulled him into a room. It was the bar. She asked for a glass of beer.

by [xo] ashley 4/27/2010, 5:03 pm

<3--[Emily]--<< wrote:[Yep that's fine! (:]

[okay, thanks! (;]

by [xo] ashley 4/27/2010, 5:04 pm

Writersgurl23 wrote:Izzy spotted a cute guy. She ran up to him and grabbed his hand. "Looking for the bar? Follow me!"
She pulled him into a room. It was the bar. She asked for a glass of beer.

"yeah, i actually was," trey said, smiling. he followed the girl to the bar.

by Doggiewriter23 4/27/2010, 5:05 pm

After finishing her first glass of beer, she asked for another one. And another one.
Some music came on and she began to dance.

by [xo] ashley 4/27/2010, 5:08 pm

Writersgurl23 wrote:After finishing her first glass of beer, she asked for another one. And another one.
Some music came on and she began to dance.

"enough beer?" trey said, laughing a little bit.

by Doggiewriter23 4/27/2010, 5:09 pm

She took Trey's hands and began to dance with him.

by [xo] ashley 4/27/2010, 5:10 pm

Writersgurl23 wrote:She took Trey's hands and began to dance with him.

trey started dancing with the girl. "i'm trey, by the way," he said.

by Doggiewriter23 4/27/2010, 5:12 pm

"Izzy."
She felt a little whoozy down so she sat down.

by [xo] ashley 4/27/2010, 5:14 pm

Writersgurl23 wrote:"Izzy."
She felt a little whoozy down so she sat down.

"cute name," trey smiled.

by <3--[Emily]--<< 4/27/2010, 5:14 pm

[[Hey guys just a few reminders -

1. beer comes in a bottle. And it's pretty strong, if your not old, so you couldn't just down a few bottles in a second. Instead why don't you say she took another gulp or something?
2. Don't forget detail. Long posts that have your character thinking/seeing stuff are always better & more practice! Oh and don't forget capitalization.

by Doggiewriter23 4/27/2010, 5:14 pm

"Thanks"Izzy said, flashing a flirty smile."
She waited for him to sit by her.

by Doggiewriter23 4/27/2010, 5:15 pm

<3--[Emily]--<< wrote:[[Hey guys just a few reminders -

1. beer comes in a bottle. And it's pretty strong, if your not old, so you couldn't just down a few bottles in a second. Instead why don't you say she took another gulp or something?
2. Don't forget detail. Long posts that have your character thinking/seeing stuff are always better & more practice! Oh and don't forget capitalization.

((She didn't finish all 3 glasses of beer since she was feeling wheezy.
And OK!))

by <3--[Emily]--<< 4/27/2010, 5:17 pm

Writersgurl23 wrote:
<3--[Emily]--<< wrote:[[Hey guys just a few reminders -

1. beer comes in a bottle. And it's pretty strong, if your not old, so you couldn't just down a few bottles in a second. Instead why don't you say she took another gulp or something?
2. Don't forget detail. Long posts that have your character thinking/seeing stuff are always better & more practice! Oh and don't forget capitalization.
((She didn't finish all 3 glasses of beer since she was feeling wheezy.
And OK!))

[Bottle* and what I was trying to say was be more realistic, please. And add more detail to your post - your last one was good (:]

by <3--[Emily]--<< 4/27/2010, 5:17 pm

[[rp anyone?]]

by Doggiewriter23 4/27/2010, 5:18 pm

((By glass, I mean't that the guy opened the bottle and poured it in a glass instead of her drinking it out of a bottle))

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