Poetry (My Originals)

Hey guys. Like the title said. Poetry, written by me. Most of these are inspired by emotions that I've felt, and I just had to write them out. So enjoy.

YOU RUINED ME
My life is a mess,
You killed my soul.
The words you said,
Burned a hole.
Pain seers through me,
Like a common ache.
The things that hurt,
I’ll never forget.
I can’t take this pain,
And I’m suffering a lot.
If you know what you did,
You’d actually care.
At least I wish,
You probably won’t.
You don’t care for me,
You say you do.
But I can’t see how.
How you can,
All the times you put me down.
That burning sensation,
Still sparking inside.
My emotions are tangled.
They run and hide,
Away from me,
Keeping what I say inside.
My brain says yes,
But the words my tongue does bide.
How would you feel?
If I did this to you.
Because the pain I hide,
Is oh so real.
That hatred you show,
In your voice, and face,
Peels through my outer core,
Causing disgrace.
The hurt, the pain, the awful names.
I’ll thank you now,
You ruined me.

Orangey!

OHMIGOD. I'm about to cry, cus that song is so ME. I seriously can relate.

Hey Shadow

Yeah...it was about this guy who liked me, and he was also my best friend, and then I started to like him, and he started acting like a jerk...so...simple really...xD

Yah. XD For me it's about my mom, though. Always my mom.

That's a really good poem. So sorry that it happened.

Haha. Shadow.

Thanks Arianna. I appreciate it.

Coolio, Carrot! =D

Thanks Kittykat

Wecomez.

These are awesome!

That touched me.. *sniff sniff* lol. it really did. keep rocking, orangey!

Thanks guys