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Post by Mordor 4/21/2010, 3:35 pm

Commas save lives.
For example:

"Let's eat, Grandma!"
Or...
"Let's eat Grandma!"

Please use proper puncuation when RPing and writing stories.
*Poems do not apply

xDDD
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/21/2010, 3:55 pm

I agree completely. nod Wouldn't wanna be a cannibal, now would we!
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Post by Avé 4/21/2010, 4:39 pm

That's funny. XD I agree.

Also...

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Woman: Without her, man is nothing.
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/21/2010, 4:42 pm

o.0 Woah, Avvy. Now I'll never figure out which is better. XD
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Post by Mordor 4/25/2010, 2:48 pm

x_x I don't understand, Ave
xD
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Post by kaseythegiraffe 4/25/2010, 3:58 pm

There's some person on WI who uses commas like they're going extinct or something. She'll be like:

Well, I, personally think that, if, you want to do that, then, you should, because, if you, don't, you will, be, disappointed.
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Post by Cyn431 4/25/2010, 4:01 pm

o.0 That person will use them up so quickly they will be extinct. xD

I saw that one on MLIA, Jam, and it is FUNNY. cheesy I told my LA teacher that one. Now I have to tell him the one Ave just said 'cause now I can't figure out which is better either. xD
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Post by Meerkat Scribe 4/25/2010, 6:13 pm

I often wonder about commas with quotes.

For example:

"Joshua, do you not understand me?" Ben said. "You suck at Call of Duty!"

Should it be that or:
"Joshua, do you not understand me?" Ben said, "You suck at Call of Duty!"

Another one is:

"Blahblahblah," Jill said,/. "Blahblahblah!" (<--- Just play along)
When should it be: "Blahblahblah." Jill said,/. "Blahblahblah!"

It's all very confusing! Suspect
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Post by Cyn431 4/25/2010, 6:48 pm

Hm... *thinks* idjut
I'd reply to the second, but I have a feeling my theory's incorrect. You do have a point on the quote one though!
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Post by rattyjol 4/26/2010, 12:49 am

@Meerkat: It depends on if they're two different sentences or just one. If it's one, it would be:

"Hi," she said brightly, "who are you?"

And if it's two, it would be:

"Hi," she said brightly. "Who are you?"
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Post by FOREIGN?! 4/26/2010, 8:55 am

Indeed, proper grammar is crucial and does save lives. Even if it's just a little comma. nod
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Post by amrgirl 5/1/2010, 5:23 pm

Good point. I've sent the "Let's eat grandma!" thing out to my friend and mom via texts, because neither of them use any grammar at all, and I can't understand them. And they found it funny. I was being serious...
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 5/1/2010, 5:32 pm

Children's mother: "Where your grandma?"
o__O
Does she WANT to know? ._.
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