Aishiteru

by **Komoda** 4/25/2010, 11:08 pm

Aishiteru

My tears tumble across your grave
Crystalline depths with only one question: why?
Yet there's nothing left to save
I shriek your name to the sky

The apologies slur off my lips
It's far too late now
Did you hear me? It all seems so surreal...
My broken smile hidden in a bow

I pray that you hear me...
I still see you in my dreams...
It can't all be over, can it?
Please, tell me it's not what it seems...

That laugh I never heard
Its silence severs my heart
Oh God, the regret is killing me...
I should have cared for you from the start

My existence is irrelevant to you
And it's impossible for you to ever know
But it's now or never
I should've confessed before you had to go

All those times you were by yourself
I was being too selfish and shy
Thought I had all the time in the world
But it's only a naive lie...

If you're somewhere up there
Residing in the paradise of blue
Just see it, please see it;
I love you, I love you, I love you...

by **Novastare** 4/26/2010, 12:23 pm

Wow, amazingly beautiful!! I love, love, love the last stanza. Great job!!! Simply magnificent. Very Happy

by **rattyjol** 4/26/2010, 1:07 pm

Amazing, Mo. It's so sad! D: I love how you had the extra phrase hidden in purple. Smile

by **Avé** 4/26/2010, 3:27 pm

This is amazing, Mo. It's so beautiful. ^^

by **Komoda** 4/26/2010, 6:39 pm

Thank you so much Nova, Ratty and Avvy. :3

by **rattyjol** 4/26/2010, 6:39 pm

May I ask what the title means? Smile

by **Avé** 4/26/2010, 6:40 pm

You're welcome. :3

Ratty, isn't it like, "I Love You" in Japanese or something?

by **Komoda** 4/26/2010, 7:05 pm

Ave is correct. nod

by **rattyjol** 4/26/2010, 7:13 pm

Ahh. Cool. nod

by **shadowsowner888** 4/26/2010, 11:07 pm

What a beautiful amazing poem. *-* I'm not even exaggerating, I swear it! I totally love this one, Komoda. It makes my heart ache. (In a good way. xD)