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No One Comes Out Of This World Sane

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Post by Komoda 4/29/2010, 12:19 am

How the predators scavenge
Searching through crackled skin
Tearing through the charcoal
Unaware of all the sin

Completely ignorant
How blindly the parasites blunder
Diving through all the gore
Unfocused on what awaits them under

Thousands of trapped souls
Shriek with a dire need for help
Gentle whispers in the wind
Degraded to a yelp

Eyelids closing
Pivoting in another direction
So not to get the lacy garments dirty
Acting like it's an infection

While others gnaw
They feed off of the woe
Quenching their sadistic thirst
Unashamed to have sunken so low

The rest lie impaled
Thick stakes jabbing through their throat
The life running down their shattered corpse
Yet these predators dance and gloat

Humanity is a twisted place
Laughing through all of this pain
Despite all we've accomplished
No one comes out of this world sane
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/29/2010, 12:21 pm

No one comes out of this world sane
And some of us don't even enter it sane. >3

:3 Lovely job, Komoda! I always enjoy your poems, they're so visual and creative and goooood. Very Happy
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Post by Komoda 4/29/2010, 6:45 pm

Thank you so much, Ado! ^^
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 4/29/2010, 8:02 pm

Oo,oO *gasps*

Mo. Seriously... EPIC! 8D
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Post by Komoda 4/29/2010, 9:47 pm

Thankies, Afi!! :3
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Post by Blue Aqua Wind 4/29/2010, 10:14 pm

:O

this is an epic poem.
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Post by Komoda 4/29/2010, 10:15 pm

Thank you, Gracy! Very Happy
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Post by Blue Aqua Wind 4/29/2010, 10:20 pm

you're welcome, mo. (:
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Post by rattyjol 4/30/2010, 12:09 am

:O

Scary... Really good, though. nod

And I agree with Shadow. Many of us don't even enter this world sane. xD
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Post by Komoda 4/30/2010, 6:40 pm

Haha, so true. XD Thankies, Ratty!
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