Feel For You

Maturity: PG-13? You can guess what it's about and then I'll tell you.
Fantasy: None. But this doesn't apply to my life AT ALL.

I'll add the rest later.


I feel for you, you're pain I share
I don't say a word but I promise I care
You don't hate the people who do what they do
But the house where they do those things to you

You're screaming, "Please stop, don't do this to me!"
Shouting, kicking, beg to me free
Stuck in a prison with guards by the gate
Knowing that happiness is coming too late

You have no home to run back to
Emotions stuck inside you with super glue
You don't have someone's name to scream
As you are thrust into pain that is extreme

There is never peace of mind
Nothing good for you to find
Some have it all, you have none
But hope that your life isn't yet done

OMG, I love this so far. xD Not only does it rhyme, but it's got like perfect rhythm.

OMG, I just noticed that rhythm doesn't have any vowels! xD (Besides y.)

This is really great so far, Pug! It has so much emotion, and just like Shadow said, it has great rhythm.

Good job! I like it!

I agree with Komoda! Emotional and a great rythym!

Thanks, everyone.

You're welcome!

I came up with more.

Ooh, I'll go read it!

That was good.

Thanks, Shadow!

Whoah, that was really great! =D

Thanks!

Wow, thats really really really good. I love it!
The rhyming is great. It fits so well!

Thanks!

That's awesome. But really sad.

Yeah. I'm not sure if it's about bullying or abuse, but I got the idea to write about it.