Hey, it's another untitled thingy by SaddleClub (as if there aren't enough of those....)
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Hey, it's another untitled thingy by SaddleClub (as if there aren't enough of those....)
I don't know how I thought of this, I just did. It's gonna be edited and expanded on and stuff at some point (probably never) though it'll probably end up like all my other untitled things.....forgotten, ignored, and never added to......well, enjoy this little thing I typed up.
Thunder crashed and lightning illuminated the world as Felicity ran. Her eyes were being stung by the heavy rain which the wind was blowing harshly into her face. The dark ocean waves crashed against her legs, threatening to bring her down at any moment. Her hair was drenched, as was her now torn and tattered dress.
She couldn’t take the struggle anymore, and she fell on the wet sand. She was gasping for air, though the salt water that kept surrounding her didn’t help. Behind her, she heard a deep, maniacal laugh.
“Give up, girl,” the voice spoke. “You’ll never win.” Heavy, thudding footsteps followed the words.
Looking behind her, she saw a large shadow approaching. Quickly standing up, she grasped her seashell necklace, and then dove into the waves. She felt the water envelope her as she dove, deeper and deeper. Free from the torture....at least for now….
Thunder crashed and lightning illuminated the world as Felicity ran. Her eyes were being stung by the heavy rain which the wind was blowing harshly into her face. The dark ocean waves crashed against her legs, threatening to bring her down at any moment. Her hair was drenched, as was her now torn and tattered dress.
She couldn’t take the struggle anymore, and she fell on the wet sand. She was gasping for air, though the salt water that kept surrounding her didn’t help. Behind her, she heard a deep, maniacal laugh.
“Give up, girl,” the voice spoke. “You’ll never win.” Heavy, thudding footsteps followed the words.
Looking behind her, she saw a large shadow approaching. Quickly standing up, she grasped her seashell necklace, and then dove into the waves. She felt the water envelope her as she dove, deeper and deeper. Free from the torture....at least for now….
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Re: Hey, it's another untitled thingy by SaddleClub (as if there aren't enough of those....)
:3 Even if it turns out just to be a little short story, I think it's really good.
Re: Hey, it's another untitled thingy by SaddleClub (as if there aren't enough of those....)
Thanks (PS: what do you think of the temporary title? xD)
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Re: Hey, it's another untitled thingy by SaddleClub (as if there aren't enough of those....)
You mean "Hey, it's another untitled thingy by SaddleClub"? I find it delightful. Unless I'm missing something here, in which case . . . um . . . enlighten me? xD
Re: Hey, it's another untitled thingy by SaddleClub (as if there aren't enough of those....)
Thank you for enjoying it xD I thought it was more fun than "An Untitled Story by Saddle" cuz there's like 546376380817609189763 of those. xD And poems xD
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Re: Hey, it's another untitled thingy by SaddleClub (as if there aren't enough of those....)
Lol, swelcome. x3 It does add a nice hint of special flavor to it! Makes people wanna come and taste the story.
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