Cutting my heart in two

by Hyro201 5/12/2010, 4:45 pm

Blood pouring from my open wounds
You're staring as if it wasn't you
Who did this to me
My vision starting to fail
Despair at its peak
Do you see
Do you see
What you did to me

Tears spring into your eyes
But you don't let go of the knife
If anything your grip tightens
I can't see anymore but i know
You're standing right over me
Do you see
Do you see
What you have done to me

Tears splash into my wounds
Keeping time with your sobs
A cold pain plunges into my chest
Cutting my heart in two
I slip away never to return
Do you see
Do you see
You have killed me

by **Malicious Nightmares** 5/12/2010, 4:51 pm

Eeep! Lovelovelove it! cheesy

by Hyro201 5/12/2010, 4:52 pm

Thank you! Smile

I think the world is balanced now

by **Malicious Nightmares** 5/12/2010, 4:53 pm

Of course the world is not balanced. rolleyes

by Hyro201 5/12/2010, 4:54 pm

well my world it is i was throwing the world out of balance by putting a mushy poem up there

by **Malicious Nightmares** 5/12/2010, 4:57 pm

I always hate myself after I write mushy poems. XP

by Hyro201 5/12/2010, 4:58 pm

yea me too but i wanted something in that contest kinda threw me off a bit but now that this on is on the fourms i should be right on track

by **Malicious Nightmares** 5/12/2010, 5:01 pm

I'm glad mine was more 'break-up'-y. XD

by Hyro201 5/12/2010, 5:03 pm

I should have gone with that sort of thing it at least wouldnt have been so tough to press the send button

by **Malicious Nightmares** 5/12/2010, 5:04 pm

XDDDDD

But then, if it's TOO break-up ish, then you wouldn't have much chance of winning. XP

by Hyro201 5/12/2010, 5:06 pm

yea you're right

by **shadowsowner888** 5/13/2010, 9:16 pm

Please do not post twice in a row. If you have something else to say but nobody else has posted, just edit your original post to include this information. Thank you!