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Lyly's Lively Writer's Block Thread - I'm cuuuurrreeeed!

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Post by Epileptic Lies 8/1/2009, 1:38 am

Don't you hate it when you have an idea for a story, you know what's going to happen, you've seen this story as a movie in your head, but you just can't put it together with words? Yeah, I've got a case of writer's block.

Golden Hearts, Silver Stars wrote:Brock knelt down to check her pulse. "Ash-"

"I know," Ash interrupted Brock. He knelt down beside the fallen girl, hands in fists. Ash pressed her stomach several times in rhythm. "C'mon, wake up!" he cried in a worried tone. He paused. "Well, this is the last resort . . ." Ash leaned down, ready to give the girl the 'Kiss of Life'. Unexpectedly, the girl coughed up water into Ash's face. She slowly opened her eyes, but taking notice of Ash's face right in front of hers, she slapped him away.

"What do you think you're doing?!?" she shouted at him angrily.

I'm stuck here. I need some ideas for a conversation like You-Just-Almost-Kissed-Me-And-I-Don't-Even-Know-You full of awkwardness. xD


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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/1/2009, 11:31 pm

Dude, that's awesome. Not rushed at all, IMO.
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Post by Epileptic Lies 8/1/2009, 11:38 pm

Haha, thanks. Really?
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/2/2009, 8:42 pm

Yes. I love it already. ^^
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/10/2009, 4:16 pm

I have no idea what to tell you, Lyly. Sorry.
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Post by Epileptic Lies 8/10/2009, 4:18 pm

Dx Aww.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/13/2009, 3:43 pm

yeah i hate that
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/14/2009, 10:20 am

Maybe it could go something like this? xD

"Uh - I - er -"

nod Yup, that about sums it up.

xD Or maybe not. But that could be a start! Other than that I don't know, cus I don't know much about the charries.
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/14/2009, 10:26 am

YES I LOVE IT ! i think you are denfiently curred lol
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Post by Epileptic Lies 8/14/2009, 5:29 pm

shadowsowner888 wrote:Maybe it could go something like this? xD

"Uh - I - er -"

nod Yup, that about sums it up.

xD Or maybe not. But that could be a start! Other than that I don't know, cus I don't know much about the charries.

Well, I kinda already wrote the first chapter haha. Ash is a bit rash and gets angry easily, so no doubt he'd be angry because he saved Ligia, but she was angry at him. And Ligia well, she gets distracted easily, much like myself.
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Post by Epileptic Lies 8/14/2009, 5:30 pm

Thanks Comp
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/14/2009, 5:36 pm

yeah sure anytime:)
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/14/2009, 5:57 pm

Ahh, okay. xD Glad you figured it out, then!
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Post by *Strongly*[Emo]tional 8/14/2009, 5:58 pm

yeah glad you aqre curreed now you can write books for me to read lol
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