Re: Dear Justin...(Mouse's TwigWriSum story)(Updated on 6-8-10)

by **LuvPink** 6/8/2010, 9:08 pm

Nice! That's really good and cute Smile

by Mouse 6/9/2010, 8:13 am

Thanks Ash! Very Happy

by The Newms 6/9/2010, 7:12 pm

Nice new parts. (I had to stop and laugh for a good minute at the stripper part. Way to.....not censor your story. xD It's all good, though.) I'm really interested in what's gonna happen nest, but I've got one question....if Justin ignores you/Liz constantly...why are you writing to him? (Or does he not get the letters? Is it like a diary, only you're using his name...?)

by amrgirl 6/9/2010, 8:25 pm

Aw, that's really good! I love it!

by **shadowsowner888** 6/9/2010, 10:16 pm

Loved the new parts! <3

(Oh, and a moderatory note now. While bumping is okay here, it's preferred that instead of just saying "bump," you say something like, "I posted more" or something with actual content. nod

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by Mouse 6/9/2010, 11:56 pm

Yeah, it's sorta like an account of my summer through letters that I'll never actually send. Ever. xD

Thanks Anna! :3

Thanks Mom! Very Happy

by The Newms 6/11/2010, 5:33 pm

Gotcha! That makes more sense now = P For a sec, I thought you gave him those letters, and all I could think is "Wow, that would be awkward to read....". But it makes a good story concept!

by Mouse 6/12/2010, 4:33 pm

Yeah, that would be awk-ward. x3 Thanks Newmsie!

by KittyKat913 6/26/2010, 7:52 pm

Wow.

This is amazing.

You manage to give it such depth for being just one-sided letters, and explain the situation perfectly and gradually, which is super difficult.

I am jealous of your super-ninja writing skill. :]

Oh, also, to fix the spacing on Word so it goes to here as well: You need to click on the "Paragraph" button, the one with the up-down arrows next to the alignment buttons, and click "Remove Space After Paragraph". Then you just put an "Enter" between each paragraph and it copies-pastes perfectly!

<3 Kitty

by Mouse 6/28/2010, 1:21 pm

Woah, thanks Kitty! Very Happy

by Horsey 7/9/2010, 1:54 pm

Very, very nice.
Cool

by **PugsRock** 7/9/2010, 2:16 pm

This is really good. (:

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