Your Jonathan Harker
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Your Jonathan Harker
I wish he would have hurt me
I wish I would have cried
I wish he chopped me to debris
Before we said goodbye
I wish I would have cried
I wish he chopped me to debris
Before we said goodbye
Toss me in a blender
Dreams of crimson on the wall
Smash me with your fender
Shards of glass to break the fall
Whip that smile off my face
With a jagged razor blade
Give me an iron maiden embrace
Viscera ropes cross the barricade
Would it change anything?
Shadow the healthy glow of my aura
Would I laugh while bleeding?
This should be a melancholic sayonara
Let the fire melt my flesh
With my hands bound in thorn
Handsaw my fingers before I refresh
Regardless, our future was forlorn
Twist the arrow in my chest
Until my ribcage shatters
Lead me to cardiac arrest
Let us forget of law-abiding matters
It wouldn't change a thing
Begging on my knees for my soul to be darker
Ecstatic while I should be seething
I was never your Mina, but your Jonathan Harker
I wish I didn't love him
I wish he didn't lie
I wish I shook this phantom limb
Before we said goodbye
I wish he didn't lie
I wish I shook this phantom limb
Before we said goodbye
Last edited by Komoda on 6/28/2010, 11:01 pm; edited 3 times in total
Komoda- Best-Selling Author
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Re: Your Jonathan Harker
S.T.U.N.N.I.N.G! O.O
Crystal Aura- Novel Creator
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Re: Your Jonathan Harker
Aww, thankies, Tal! ^u^
K, I renamed this, because I didn't like the old title. XP
K, I renamed this, because I didn't like the old title. XP
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Re: Your Jonathan Harker
Mo, you are so incredible... this poem is amazing.
<333
I was never your Mina, but your Jonathan Harker
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Re: Your Jonathan Harker
Look, it's me!Shadow the healthy glow of my aura
And this line I'm actually quoting for a good reason, to tell you that it was probably my favorite line out of the whole poem. :3 It was all great, of course, but that was my favorite. Good job!This should be a melancholic sayonara
Re: Your Jonathan Harker
Thanks so much, Avvy! ^^ That really means a lot to me. :3Avé wrote:Mo, you are so incredible... this poem is amazing.I was never your Mina, but your Jonathan Harker
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Hahaha, oh my, Ado. XDshadowsowner888 wrote:Look, it's me!Shadow the healthy glow of my auraAnd this line I'm actually quoting for a good reason, to tell you that it was probably my favorite line out of the whole poem. :3 It was all great, of course, but that was my favorite. Good job!This should be a melancholic sayonara
Yeah, that required some thesaurus usage... XD Thank you so very much, Ado! :')
- Oh, oh, changed for a third time. Because I just realized I had unintentionally made it similar to the name of another poem... And Keanu pwns all anyhow.
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<3333 -dies- I love the new name. XD
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Re: Your Jonathan Harker
Really? ^//^ Thankies, Ave!
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Re: Your Jonathan Harker
O3o
This is so awesome! [in a literal sense ]
I love this: it's really amazing. 83
I love the new title, too!
This is so awesome! [in a literal sense ]
I love this: it's really amazing. 83
I love the new title, too!
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Thanks so much, Rai! ^^
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