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Post by Komoda 6/17/2010, 6:17 pm

I wish he would have hurt me
I wish I would have cried
I wish he chopped me to debris
Before we said goodbye


Toss me in a blender
Dreams of crimson on the wall
Smash me with your fender
Shards of glass to break the fall

Whip that smile off my face
With a jagged razor blade
Give me an iron maiden embrace
Viscera ropes cross the barricade

Would it change anything?
Shadow the healthy glow of my aura
Would I laugh while bleeding?
This should be a melancholic sayonara

Let the fire melt my flesh
With my hands bound in thorn
Handsaw my fingers before I refresh
Regardless, our future was forlorn

Twist the arrow in my chest
Until my ribcage shatters
Lead me to cardiac arrest
Let us forget of law-abiding matters

It wouldn't change a thing
Begging on my knees for my soul to be darker
Ecstatic while I should be seething
I was never your Mina, but your Jonathan Harker


I wish I didn't love him
I wish he didn't lie
I wish I shook this phantom limb
Before we said goodbye


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Post by Crystal Aura 6/17/2010, 6:20 pm

S.T.U.N.N.I.N.G! O.O
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Post by Komoda 6/28/2010, 3:04 pm

Aww, thankies, Tal! ^u^

K, I renamed this, because I didn't like the old title. XP
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Post by Avé 6/28/2010, 5:15 pm

Mo, you are so incredible... this poem is amazing.

I was never your Mina, but your Jonathan Harker

<333
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/28/2010, 5:48 pm

Shadow the healthy glow of my aura
Look, it's me! Very Happy
This should be a melancholic sayonara
And this line I'm actually quoting for a good reason, to tell you that it was probably my favorite line out of the whole poem. :3 It was all great, of course, but that was my favorite. Good job!
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Post by Komoda 6/28/2010, 11:03 pm

Avé wrote:Mo, you are so incredible... this poem is amazing.

I was never your Mina, but your Jonathan Harker

<333
Thanks so much, Avvy! ^^ That really means a lot to me. :3

shadowsowner888 wrote:
Shadow the healthy glow of my aura
Look, it's me! Very Happy
This should be a melancholic sayonara
And this line I'm actually quoting for a good reason, to tell you that it was probably my favorite line out of the whole poem. :3 It was all great, of course, but that was my favorite. Good job!
Hahaha, oh my, Ado. XD

Yeah, that required some thesaurus usage... XD Thank you so very much, Ado! :')

- Oh, oh, changed for a third time. Because I just realized I had unintentionally made it similar to the name of another poem... And Keanu pwns all anyhow.
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Post by Avé 6/28/2010, 11:16 pm

<3333 -dies- I love the new name. XD
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Post by Komoda 6/28/2010, 11:32 pm

Really? ^//^ Thankies, Ave!
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Post by Rai 6/29/2010, 9:23 am

O3o
This is so awesome! [in a literal sense Wink]
I love this: it's really amazing. 83
I love the new title, too!
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Post by Komoda 6/29/2010, 11:26 am

Thanks so much, Rai! ^^
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