Kiss me in the Rain

goodbye
its time for me to go
so stare at me and smile
and tell me i look beautiful

I look outside
its raining on your car
you look at me and look outside
you already know

i wish you would kiss me
and dance with me outside
for your steps to fall
in tune with mine

dad watching silently
out the window,
watching his little girl
slowly falling for him

but that is only in my mind
as a split second passes,
i move towards the door
you whisper, wait, hold on
and you run to get my door for me

as i get out
you hold my waist
and pull me closer to you
and kiss me in the rain

Awe, I love this! :3
I think I've see this before when you were at my house (you made it up, of course x3) or else I am having a serious episode of Deja Vu. Lol!

XD wowwww pay lol

Aw, this is so sweet. <3

thank you!!

My gosh, Reeses, that's wonderful. :3 It sounds like it could be a really sweet song!

thanks~! i never thought about writing songs before... but you can ask Rai why XD! we were at my house cleaning out under my bed (no monsters, thank goodness,) (jk lol) and i found my old song book from like... forever ago lol. they were AWFUL omigosh is was so funny!

- Johnny

Haha, yeah, that's exactly how I feel when I look at my work from a few years ago. XD

haha same here XD although i thought it was amazing while i wrote it lol
but i am hooorrrriiibbllleeee at poetry now lol... man just when i didn't think i could get any worse i went and read something from seventh grade. uggg lol