Template Feedback

So, yeah... I need feedback, and comments/whatever on this template that I recently made. It's probably going to be used by BOTH Teloren AND Lazuri [considering it contains both Point Of Views.]
All credits are located at the bottom of the template, in Size 10.
The code is found under the template. [Gosh, it took a while to make the template.. D:]


Without you, I cannot live at all
My whole world surrounds you

I stumble, then I crawl
To make up your own ending

And let me know just how you feel
'Cause I am lost without you

Breathe into me and make me real
Bring me to life

All this time, I can't believe I couldn't see
Kept in the dark, but you were there in front of me

I’ve been sleeping a thousand years, it seems
Got to open my eyes to everything

Code:

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[img]http://i60.servimg.com/u/f60/14/10/48/05/line10.gif[/img][/center]

[color=olive][font=Edwardian Script ITC][size=26]Without you, I cannot live at all[/size][/font]
[size=14][font=Palatino Linotype][i]My whole world surrounds you[/i][/font][/size]

[center][size=26][font=Edwardian Script ITC]I stumble, then I crawl[/font][/size]
[size=14][font=Palatino Linotype][i]To make up your own ending[/i][/font][/size][/center]

[size=26][font=Edwardian Script ITC]And let me know just how you feel[/font][/size]
[size=14][font=Palatino Linotype][i]'Cause I am lost without you[/i][/font][/size][/color]

[center][img]http://i60.servimg.com/u/f60/14/10/48/05/line10.gif[/img]

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[img]http://i60.servimg.com/u/f60/14/10/48/05/line10.gif[/img][/center]

[color=violet][right][font=Vivaldi][size=22]Breathe into me and make me real [/size][/font]
[font=Monotype Corsiva][size=18]Bring me to life [/size][/font][/right]

[center][font=Vivaldi][size=22]All this time, I can't believe I couldn't see[/size][/font]
[font=Monotype Corsiva][size=18]Kept in the dark, but you were there in front of me[/size][/font][/center]

[right][font=Vivaldi][size=22]I’ve been sleeping a thousand years, it seems [/size][/font]
[font=Monotype Corsiva][size=18]Got to open my eyes to everything [/size][/font][/right][/color]

[center][img]http://i60.servimg.com/u/f60/14/10/48/05/line10.gif[/img]

[size=10],,,[b]Out Of Character[/b],,,
OOC posts go here
,,,[b]Characters[/b],,,
[color=olive]Teloren[/color] and [color=violet]Lazuri[/color]
,,,[b]Lyrics[/b],,,
Teloren's;;; Blurry by Puddle Of Mudd
Lazuri's;;; Bring Me To Life by Evanescence
,,,[b]Banner[/b],,,
Full credit to Ave
,,,[b]Fade[/b],,,
Full Credit to Mo
,,,[b]Planning[/b],,,
Full thanks to Mo who helped make this template possible[/size][/center]

So pretty *_*

Thank you, Noah! :33

10000000x fancier than ANY of mine .-.

Thanks! (:
I really put my time into it, and so did Ave, who made the banner,
And Mo, who chose the lyrics and arranged them wisely, as well as made the Fade.

Wow that's really fancy! Big thumbs up All of you did a good job putting it together then!

Thanks alot. :33

^///^
I think Mo spent a good half hour at picking the lyrics & stuff , unsure of how much time it took Ave to make the banner, but it must've taken some time.
And it took me about an hour to figure the rest, and to code it up. x__x

Ah, it turned out so gorgeous! ^^ The banner looks great; it really goes well with the overall template. :3 Amazing job with the formatting, Afi! *-* So shiny.

@Mo; Thanks! But it's all thanks to you. If it weren't for you, I wouldn't have any lyrics ready. x__x And I wouldn't have the pretty fade. *,*

@Cyn; Aweh, thanks alot, Cyn! :33

It looks very nice mia.

Thanks, Hyro. :33333

I love it Mia! It looks perfect, and fancy, and it's just awesome!

Heh, thanks!
[By the way, I'll work on Seryl's template, soon. I've gotta do Littletoes' order at my shop, first. [Which I shall do my best to do, tomorrow.]]