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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/28/2010, 10:21 am

Maturity; High ... Death
Fantasy; Low ... I doubt there's any
irst NON T x L poem ... in a while. XD

He asked her for respect,
But her heart's all shattered.
She finds her life a wreck,
But it never really mattered.

He had an icy cold heart,
And so he never cared.
She knew he was smart,
And so she was prepared.

He told her to stay silent,
As he tried to kill her.
She knew her death was violent,
As her life soon became a blur.

He soon lived a life with regret,
But didn't dare express it.
She swore she'd never forget,
But it was hard to admit.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/29/2010, 12:13 pm

No one likes it? D8
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Post by Hahaha818 6/29/2010, 12:26 pm

I do! Great job, Mia! Very Happy

And maybe for the title "Hard to Admit"?
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/29/2010, 12:31 pm

I'll keep the idea in mind.

And thanks. ;3
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Post by Hahaha818 6/29/2010, 12:39 pm

You're welcome!
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Post by Dark Fairytales 6/29/2010, 3:33 pm

Oh wow Mia, this is so beautiful! (:
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/29/2010, 3:38 pm

Thanks, Eve. :33
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Post by Komoda 6/29/2010, 4:08 pm

Aww, Afi, your poems are getting romancey! XD Anyway, this is really beautiful. I love, love, love tragic romance.

He told her to stay silent,
As he tried to kill her.
She knew her death was violent,
As her life soon became a blur.

This for sure is my favourite, but it's all wonderful.

Sorry; I can't think of any name suggestions... I was never good at picking titles. XD
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/29/2010, 4:13 pm

-hides like a coward- NOT THE ROMANCY STAGE!! DD:

I was never good at picking titles, either. e_o
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Post by Avé 6/29/2010, 4:29 pm

Hmm... 'Her Death Was Violent?'

I agree with Mo. XD Your poems are getting romancey!

Anyway, I absolutely love this one, Mia. It's so gorgeous. <3
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/29/2010, 4:45 pm

I'll keep it in mind. (:

NOOO!!!! I blame LAZURI'S DEATH. XD -_-

Thanks though! :33
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Post by Love_is_Lightning 6/30/2010, 4:04 am

Oooo I really like this.
It's really different from a lot of poems I read, and it's got the whole ' deadly love ' put in there. (8
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/30/2010, 9:09 am

Thank you,... *searches nickname list*
Lighting. It's.. at the top of the list, and simple. XD
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