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Post by Haileadorable211 7/3/2010, 6:59 pm

Run
What?
Run
Why?
Run
Who?
Run
Where?
Please
No
Go
No
Just
No
Please
No
Run
I dont know here ive been
Run
I dont know where im going
Run
And suddenly
Run
I fade
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Post by Avé 7/4/2010, 9:29 am

Like your other one, I really love the style of this. It's very simple, yet the meaning can really be interpreted to be a lot of things. Nice job! :3
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Post by Johnny Gal 7/6/2010, 8:06 am

i agree with Ave on this totally! i love the way you wrote it and how even though its simple, it takes a moment to understand it. Smile

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Post by Johnny Gal 7/6/2010, 8:07 am

oops jeez sorry got a little frusturated with my computer..... Razz

sorry 'bout this!
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