Do you think i should continue?

I started writing this story and im not sure where its going exactly but i would like you peoples opinion on the intro part of it.

Have you ever heard the saying ‘be careful what you wish for’? Well it’s true. You need to be careful. Very careful. I wasn’t. I made a wish that turned my entire life upside-down, and I wasn’t the only one affected. Others were involved to. Some didn’t make it and that will be on my conscience forever. I will always look back and wonder about where I would be now if I hadn’t wished. Because, you see, wishes take you literally. They take you at what you say not, which is not always what you mean. Maybe after you read about what happened, you won’t make the same mistake that I did.

My name’s Amanda Casey and this is my story.


Any comments are appreciated

I think you should, it sounds pretty interesting!
There are a few grammatical mistakes in there, and also the last two sentences seem like they don't exactly make sense? Maybe I was just reading it wrong. Dx

But its a wonderful intro and I would definately work on continuing it!

Thanks! I'm in the middle of another story right now but when I'm finished I'll try writing this one

Its a really good idea, but you'd have to do something TOTALLY new with it, or else it will be just like every other book
Yesh, I is negative >:3

~Twi

Oooh, sounds interesting! I think you should continue with it, because it sounds like it'd be very unique and intriguing. But like Grace said, I see a few grammatical errors. Just fix those and I think it'd look fantastic!