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Good Luck Charms--Short, but not as short as the other. :3

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Post by kindro 7/8/2010, 2:19 am

Hey you, out there in the cold
Getting lonely, getting old
If you'd let me say a prayer
I could take us someplace where
The sun always shines upon our faces
And people put us in our places
Locked in each other's arms
We're each other's good luck charms.
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Post by Johnny Gal 7/9/2010, 8:00 am

awww its really cute! i love it!

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Post by Rai 7/9/2010, 9:34 am

That's really sweet! 83 The beat is so consistent and... right, if that makes sense. Fantastic job! applause
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Post by Dragon Lover 7/9/2010, 9:37 am

I agree with Rai about the beat--it's perfect!
I love it, too! Wonderful job. [[:
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Post by kindro 7/10/2010, 12:01 am

Thanks, you guys. :3 I've been talking with Ave, a wickedly awesome poet[in my perspective] and she suggested that I write. So..yay! I'm glad you guys liked it. :3
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Post by Johnny Gal 7/11/2010, 6:16 pm

of course! and Ave is amazing. ^^
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Post by Adrigirl19 7/13/2010, 4:30 pm

I love this. It is great!

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