Darkness

What good would it do
To stop the bleeding
if the bleeding had already started
The blood is already lost
Death is just within reach
TakeIt'sHand
It will guide you
But they stop the bleeding
so it may start again
Its like cutting the scar
Burning the cut
Stabbing the wound
ThatWillNeverHeal
Dont stop the bleeding
Oh no dont stop the bleeding
Just.
Cut.
The.
Scar.

Lame eh?

This an awesome poem, Haile. Of course, I'm a bit of pessimist myself, so I can really relate to it. Great job! ^^

i love it! amazing!

thanks

I like it AlOt!!! :DDD I write some things like that sometimes but they aren't as good as urs,--

example.--heres one--

My hands r shaking.The tears r falling. The pain makes me want 2 disapear, to be forgotten,. Theres no time to waste, there is no one there. My finger tightens and pulls the trigger. The pain is gone but so am i, and so this letter...is my goodbye.

((xDD I think it's too rymey at the end, mine's so ametuer compared 2 urs xDD ))

Its actually really good i like it

This is really amazing! 83
Great job!

:3 thanks uuuuu

Really? Thnx. :]

I liked them both!!! Lexi yours was good. They both rocked my sock, lol

LOL

xD Lol awesome thnx