Your Beautiful Tears

by **Avé** 7/19/2010, 3:38 am

Maturity - Um, I'd say low. Not really any romance or anything. Possible suicide.
Fantasy - None.

When I was in third grade, I had a conversation with the self-proclaimed class bully. She was crying in the corner of the playground and my friends dared me to go up and talk to her. She had always picked on us, so this was our time to take advantage of her. Though I've learned better by now, back then I was ready to start, well, tormenting her. We all wanted revenge for what she had done to us in the past.

And now this is turning into rambling. ._. Either way, I ended up actually talking to her. She explained, and this is practically what she told me. I didn't really understand back then, though I suppose I may have the slightest clue now. I've lost contact with her since.

Britney, I hope you're doing well.

Your Beautiful Tears 28ri8a1

YOUR BEAUTIFUL TEARS

I never thought I was pretty.
I was told I would never be.

But Mama always said to me
that "I am beautiful inside."

I'm afraid I can't even
use that as an excuse.

Because I am rotten.
Rather judgemental.

I tend to get
easily jealous

I am not appreciated
Though I understand.

I live in constant fear that
Someday I might be alone

And I swear to you
That it will happen.

I find pleasure in dying.
(I take pride in lying.)

I am afraid of what I have become
Is it possible I am now a monster?

Just do us all a favor
Stay away from me

Your comfort is in
My best interest

So I'm asking you, please,
To get out of my life now

You won't regret it
I can promise you.

I don't want to get down on myself
Oh, but I already am and have been.

And I'm telling you this
because I do love you.

I'm not the kind of person
you'd want to be around

I never thought I was pretty.
I was told I would never be.

But Mama always said to me
that "I am beautiful inside."

I'm afraid I can't even
use that as an excuse.

by kindro 7/19/2010, 3:48 am

Epic. I love how you repeat the first three stanzas at the end. It adds..meaning. I love it. <33

by Mrs. Jessi O'Shea 7/19/2010, 3:56 am

0.0 That was really good, Avé! applause

by **Komoda** 7/19/2010, 9:53 am

That was absolutely breathtaking, Ave. *-* The inspiration for this was really touching, too. :3

by Rai 7/19/2010, 10:24 am

Another absolutely astonishing one, Ave. applause

It's really, really beautiful. Wonderful job!

by **Avé** 7/19/2010, 3:23 pm

D'aw, thanks guys! <3

by conich 7/19/2010, 7:54 pm

Another amazing one! I love how you used that conversation with a bully to write this. It gives perspective somehow. Also, I love how you end it. Very good! Very Happy

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