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Melancholiac Farewells.

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Post by Rai 7/19/2010, 5:49 pm

Maturity: Medium... it's kind of about this insane girl questioning a boy and giving him the pain he caused her for future complications.

Fantasy: Low. By giving him the pain, it's not literal. x3



Melancholiac Farewells. 468790725_51a83e2d97
//melancholiac//farewells//



babe, with this melancholiac farewell
I bid goodbye to sunlight and you
'cause, darling, you know that it's the end
with this melancholiac farewell.
so just spare me all your pity.


maybe I could just toss this at you
but, babe, I'm sure it wouldn't hurt
not with your 'steel heart'
that apparently I hurt
so does this make it your melancholiac farewell?


I don't understand what the pain is
where do you store yours?
I don't store mine, I just shoosh it out the door
but apparently you lock yours up
and cause many melancholiac farewells


so what would you rather?
pain now or later?
'cause I can give you both easily
since you lock them away
to cause melancholiac farewells


please, still spare me the pity
while I escort my pain out the door
but why don't you keep yours for a little longer?
or will you break down?
with so many melancholiac farewells



the pain is yours, so is the choice
I wonder what you'll choose
I watch you with fascination and wonder
what time will you loose the pain?
and stop these melancholiac farewells?


spare me even more pity
'cause you look at me with that look
I'm going to shoosh my pain out the door
yet again, then give it to you
And watch you suffer, baby, these melancholiac farewells


but why would I do that, you ask?
well, babe, you see
that when someone loves someone
but then they go away
that's what causes your melancholiac farewells


so here is my pain
but feel free to make it yours
they'll feel right at home
babe, remember to lock the doors
so there'll be a constant melancholiac farewell


I can see right through you
into the open house
of pain that you keep inside
does it give you company?
or more melancholiac farewells?


what do you get enjoyment out of?
darling, why do you store the pain?
eh, so many questions
that aren't meant to be answered, I guess
because that'd reveal the secret of melancholiac farewells


again, don't dump your pain on me
I can bathe in my water
but meanwhile you bathe in pain
the pain that I gave you
for those future melancholiac farewells


so while I throw my pain at you
and give you all my sorrow
honey, you can just relax with your pain
your guests, they choose to stay for a while
to assist you with those melancholiac farewells.



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Post by Avé 7/19/2010, 8:00 pm

Wow, Rai. This is absolutely amazing. I love everything about it... gosh, it's beautiful. Wonderful job! :3

I love the picture, by the way. ^^
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Post by Rai 7/19/2010, 8:52 pm

Thank you, Ave. Very Happy
I love the picture too: it has beautiful composition. 83
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